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Wednesday, April 02, 2008

Haiku for 3WW


The Three Word Wednesday prompt by Pia: bounce, mysterious, parallel

After you read what others have written, or before, please feel free to join in this very vibrant meme!





parallel shadows
mysterious bounce of light
crows flash summer sun





Fractal created in Fractal Explorer




26 comments:

watermaid said...

Unsure how to join in. I'll come back later when someone has shown me the way.

lissa said...

you have a way with words, great poem

pjd said...

This is a beautiful image and a proper haiku to be sure. I didn't expect the crows, and that's what makes it special.

pia said...

Wow were the crows unexpected. How can you take so few words and make them fly?

Lucy said...

oops, I told Rel he won the shortest 3ww contest.. I think it is You Sue! great job!

anthonynorth said...

Crows and sun? A balance of light and dark. An alchemical haiku.
Excellent!

Linda Jacobs said...

As clear and precise as a photo! Love the crows!

Jo Anne O. said...

I always love your haikus! Such imagery!!!

Q said...

How do you do it??
This is my favorite to date!
You are so good! A book of your Haikus would be a best seller!
Wow! I am impressed.
I often laugh, have cried but always I awed by your talent.
Thank you again.
Sherry

Tammy said...

You amaze me with your 3WW haiku. Brilliant yet again.

Noah the Great said...

Beautiful. Oddly, I love crows.

paisley said...

i love the way you used bounce.. it was the reason i could not form a poem... nothing would make itself available to me in poetic form that contained the word bounce....

Jujee said...

Great imagery.
At first I thought it was vultures, but crows works much better...not so menacing.

iamnasra said...

oh the light is coming towards me

Thank you

iamnasra said...

oh the light is coming towards me

Thank you

Greyscale Territory said...

A great burst of images!

Gemma

Jo said...

Just right, very visual, love the last line.

Christine said...

I'm looking at crow's wings gleaming white in the sun. Great job!

TC said...

The crow very much threw me as well. Well done.

slynne said...

I am happy to be new to three word wednesday. I love that you used three lines for your threewords, too. Yay!

One More Believer said...

yes, the crow is a beautiful surprise...

Prats said...

Tha fractals are beautiful
Loved this simple poem.

gautami tripathy said...

Entry of crows made it great!

parallel plot

WriterKat said...

I love the simplicity and quiet power of this. I just read your one from last week and really enjoyed it. You are a master of haiku.

Jane Doe said...

Great poem, I love the imagery. I can almost hear the crow cawing in the sun.

Marcia (MeeAugraphie) said...

"Crows flash summer sun" Love that phrase.