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Sunday, April 20, 2008

Sunday Scribblings Poem

Sunday Scribblings prompts: Compose. It's a strange word if you look at it, so that is the prompt for this week! It can be used to describe the process of any type of art-making including writing, photography, painting, drawing, singing, etc., etc. It's a big word. What does it bring up for you?



Moved by Wings of Wright

shuttling between good
and somebody's bad
carried by wings that rumble
from sameness and back

where mobius mirrors
false prophets of forever
into a galaxy exploding
over one land imploding

while lights and flames
merge like movie trailers
I'm carried between old stars
and new pinlights of earth





Fractal King of Grim created by Sue

21 comments:

Granny Smith said...

I appreciate the title and the lands exploding and imploding. A powerful poem.

Tammy said...

Nice imagery and power in these words.

murat11 said...

"where mobius mirrors
false prophets of forever
into a galaxy exploding
over one land imploding

while lights and flames
merge like movie trailers..."

you said it, girl. them's mighty fine tumbling words.

paisley said...

while lights and flames
merge like movie trailers
I'm carried between old stars


oh this is me.... but i am usually lost in the old movie trailers!!!!!!

Yours truly Mason said...

powerful imagery, great read, made my imagination expolde

Lilibeth said...

Flight. They really started something there...but the space tumbling you do leaves my head spinning. . . all out of my orbit.

Tammie Lee said...

Your writing moves like a dance full of strength and truth. I like the feel and am in awe of the way you express in this piece!

Yes, Idaho and NW MT, we be experiencing much the same weather.
Loved hearing from you.

annieelf said...

Outstanding imagery and all in process, ever-changing.

CHEFDRUCK said...

Wings that rumble - nice imagery.

Amarettogirl said...

As usual, a deep collection and combination of words that speak volumes!! Wonderful!

forgetfulone said...

I love your imagery and word choice. My SS is posted now.

Whitesnake said...

Just when i think It can't get any better it does.

anthonynorth said...

The imaginative impulse perfectly done!

June said...

Your imagery is amazing! Thanks for stopping by Spatter...

Sherry/Cherie said...

Very powerful with incredible imagery.

Jo Anne O. said...

Very powerful as always, I could see it all!

Lucy said...

your tumble words are always amazing. :)

The Alchemist said...

Powerful images full of force and wonder. Thanks Tumblewords.

LN- Nickers and Ink said...

Great launch from the prompt! Love the brilliant departure from the norm. The imagery is excellent, and the fractal is fascinating.

Blessings,
Linda - Nickers and Ink

ON GUARD, at Nickers and Ink

Inland Empire Girl said...

What a good post for compose. Very enjoyable.

texasblu said...

vivid imagery - I like it very much!