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ooo i like the double play in that last line...the ship is sinking eh?
I am always amazed at all the different takes on one image. Atlantis was my last thought.Nice Magpie
oh my this was niceand yes it does feel like that- 2012
So much said in so few words... this is great!
Great words, although I'm a 2012 sceptic.
Simple but BAM it hits ya...thanks
'Tis Atlantis like! great - let's steer 12 somewhere worth going!
Wrapped up in a nutshell... Nice one.
Excellent creative process here!
Love the Atlantis reference...
Not a word wasted and so much said.Well done.=)
You have the best ideas!
I always enjoy your poetry, Tumblewords. This one is especially well written. Brilliant!! =)
Gee - I never gave Atlantis a thought! Nicely put!
Wow - you got a lot into those 17 syllables! That's really well done.
What a last line! Fabulous take.
Dear Tumblewords,That was a superb take on the magpie. All the same, I hope it is not prophetic.
Great story given in so few words, clever and relevant. Nice one!Jamie
Stunning take on this image. Atlantis is a great allusion.
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