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Love the second line. This one really caught my attention.
A very thoughtful haiku. — KKay, Alberta, CanadaAn Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
'wrapping the future' - what a wonderful metaphor.
Beautiful senryu... packs a punch in few words.~laurie
I really like the poignancy of "retreat burns". Nice.
That enigmatic last line is brilliant.
Beautiful Haiku... your expression for the pic is touching.
Oh I like this a lot!
'wrapping the future' ... beautiful.
Very nice. So much said in so few words.
Love the first two lines; solid finish.
wrapping the future....yes! Wonderful, deep Magpie. Thank you.
Yes! The future is our children. Let us hope for and try to help them find resilience. Wonderful response to the prompt.
Your few words are such food for thought. Each phrase is rich with possible meaning: strong arms of a mother, of a country, thug tactics; combine with retreat burns. So intriguing for the reader.
I had the same reaction to "wrapping the future" Wonderful line! Mad Kane
I must look up "senryu" now! I sure like yours!
The last line is amazing.
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