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Beautiful. I especially like the last line. : )
I can see this happening! Just lovely.
'astral nurseries' such a gorgeous image, beautiful piece.
Beautiful. All the universe as one, and continuance in the last line.
I too love that last line...wonderful magpie!
Flowers in the Cosmos. What a nice touch.
Tanka is one of my favorite short forms, especially when handled as adroitly as here. An imaginative and creative take on the prompt.
What a cool take on the prompt. I was also struck by "astral nurseries"...very nice. vb
A truly beautiful cosmos shared.
What a brightly colored cosmos!!Very well expressed.. :)Hugs xox
"wild flowers blossomin the distant Pleiades"Love this...and: "astral nurseries" I enjoyed this very much!
Lovely imagery! Mad Kane
I too have been floating through this cosmos..a beautiful place you've shown us!!
vivid impression of the heavens!
Oh, this will be one of my favorite Magpies!!
the birthing of stars...in factal harmony....the beauty of it...bkm
Distinctive, smart-vivid work.
totally love :)astral nurseries...i can't even tell you how much this makes my heart sing
this is just lovely...astral nurseries- we all love this line!
Baby stars and astral nurseries? Aaaaahhhh!!!
What an interesting and beautiful image of the universe!
I love the idea of "astral nurseries." Great Magpie!
Sue,Now that you mention it. The gallaxy does resemble a giant flower garden. Nice.rel
Most original take on the prompt! So indeed are stars born.Thank you.
I love the imagery of "baby stars claimed by astral nurseries." Looking up at the night sky or seeing the images from Hubbel Scope is more than the mind can imagine. Your poem is so beautiful that I can almost touch the universe.
nice. -- I love the last 2 lines in particular. Everything is found in the pleiades... thank you for sharing this.
If only there were such places. Beautiful 'pie!
This is lovely, Tumblewords. I like how you've woven stars and flowers together to create an image; beautiful.
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