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Monday, April 04, 2011

Haiku for Magpie Tales

Willow at Magpie Tales offers an enigmatic image each week to pull words from writers. This week:










pocked and puffed

morning pancakes brown

Hubble scans

 
 
 
 
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29 comments:

Kristen Haskell said...

Pocked - I love it! I was trying to get to that word and it evaded me. I guess I wasn't supposed to use it in my poem. It works and is wonderful in yours.

Helen said...

Many ideas popped into my head when I saw Tess' photo .. pox was the first. Love your Magpie.

anthonynorth said...

Hubble scans. I like that.

hedgewitch said...

hmmm, it actually does look like its ready to be flipped. Nice catch, and a sharp haiku.

Berowne said...

Celestial pancakes -- good.

honeyhaiku said...

This is wonderful!

namingconstellations said...

Heh, nifty comparison... it does look rather like the batter once you've had it on the griddle for a bit. Maybe that's how it formed in the first place... billions upon billions of gallons of batter.

versebender said...

Sensational juxtaposition of images. Vb

Lyn said...

I'll take a couple, and pass the syrup, please..some for Hubbel?

Naquillity said...

that's a great haiku. love your choice of words. hope all is well your way. have a great night.

Isabel Doyle said...

excellent haiku and nice original vision

120 Socks said...

Nice one Tumblewords! Bet those pancakes are tasty too!

indiwriter said...

wow! liked your imagination.. so out-of-the-box!

cheers,

LKHarris-Kolp said...

I'm sitting here with my first cup of coffee and now I want pancakes for breakfast = )... beautiful 'ku and very clever perception of the photo.

~laurie

Jacqui Binford-Bell said...

Admire those that can get a haiku just right in English.

annell said...

I never met a pancake I didn't like. And I also like this write.

Celestial Dreamz said...

I find it so different and unique. thanks for sharing.

Olivia said...

A very clever take indeed.. May I have some please..?

Hugs xx

Tess Kincaid said...

Pancakes and Hubble! What a great combo.

Steve Isaak said...

Exemplary, one of the most distinctive takes on rain in this batch, thus far.

Carrie Burtt said...

...please pass the syrup....love this one!! :-)

HyperCRYPTICal said...

Yum Yum! I'm hungry! Excellent haiku!

Anna :o]

chiccoreal said...

Dear TW: Great imagination! Totally creative!

Old Ollie said...

What mix - cool!

Trellissimo said...

Interesting recipe! :)

Promising Poets Parking Lot said...

cute.

signed...bkm said...

pocketed and puffed....that is exactly what those bubbles look like....blessings...bkm

Mad Kane said...

What a witty haiku. And so true!
Mad Kane

Bee's Blog said...

I can taste them from here.