Photos Poetry Prose
Pocked - I love it! I was trying to get to that word and it evaded me. I guess I wasn't supposed to use it in my poem. It works and is wonderful in yours.
Many ideas popped into my head when I saw Tess' photo .. pox was the first. Love your Magpie.
Hubble scans. I like that.
hmmm, it actually does look like its ready to be flipped. Nice catch, and a sharp haiku.
Celestial pancakes -- good.
This is wonderful!
Heh, nifty comparison... it does look rather like the batter once you've had it on the griddle for a bit. Maybe that's how it formed in the first place... billions upon billions of gallons of batter.
Sensational juxtaposition of images. Vb
I'll take a couple, and pass the syrup, please..some for Hubbel?
that's a great haiku. love your choice of words. hope all is well your way. have a great night.
excellent haiku and nice original vision
Nice one Tumblewords! Bet those pancakes are tasty too!
wow! liked your imagination.. so out-of-the-box! cheers,
I'm sitting here with my first cup of coffee and now I want pancakes for breakfast = )... beautiful 'ku and very clever perception of the photo.~laurie
Admire those that can get a haiku just right in English.
I never met a pancake I didn't like. And I also like this write.
I find it so different and unique. thanks for sharing.
A very clever take indeed.. May I have some please..?Hugs xx
Pancakes and Hubble! What a great combo.
Exemplary, one of the most distinctive takes on rain in this batch, thus far.
...please pass the syrup....love this one!! :-)
Yum Yum! I'm hungry! Excellent haiku!Anna :o]
Dear TW: Great imagination! Totally creative!
What mix - cool!
Interesting recipe! :)
pocketed and puffed....that is exactly what those bubbles look like....blessings...bkm
What a witty haiku. And so true! Mad Kane
I can taste them from here.
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