Crystals
fractured icicles
circle the man of the moon
glide back to the sea
days sweep by in hourglass tides
drying pools to sparkling salt
A Willow Image
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Monday, February 14, 2011
Tanka for Magpie Tales #53
Willow at Magpie Tales offers an engimatic image for a weekly prompt. This one is #53.
Crystals
fractured icicles
circle the man of the moon
glide back to the sea
days sweep by in hourglass tides
drying pools to sparkling salt
Crystals
fractured icicles
circle the man of the moon
glide back to the sea
days sweep by in hourglass tides
drying pools to sparkling salt
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beautiful tanka
the imagery just sparkles
oh la la....I love this.
magical!
ooo...sea throught eh hourglass leaving salt...i like this...
It's like you swept an artist's brush over the sky with the visual you've created here.
I liked this a lot!
really liked this, it has an eerie beauty about it, almost timeless.
Really beautiful imagery. Nicely done!
For a lovely short poem, you sure cover a lot of territory...so well done!
Wow. I loved every line.
Sprkling words, as ever!
I like the notion of the face being the man in the moon.
I like the sparkling salt referencing the salt shaker.
Perfect ~~ beautiful!
Wow, you got the cycle in just a few precious words!
"days sweep by in hourglass tides"
Lovely!
Nice write! Very beautiful! :o)
Enjoy the sounds created by your words.
"days sweep by in hourglass tides
drying pools to sparkling salt"
this is a nice line... lovely image.
Sue,
Reads like an ebb tide.
Cool.
rel
Nicely done!
Shiny! A most excellent piece.
'days sweep by in hourglass tides' - wonderful:-)
I love each line! And I tried to leaved a comment about eyes, I think it is that the eyes are the window of the soul...you could say it is soul seeking soul?
This is just right.
breathtakingly beautiful. I'm jealous in the most admirable way! ;)
A delight to the senses.
A delight to the senses.
lovely! I can see the sparkles!
Sometimes a few of the choicest words convey the most flavour. Such is the case with your gem of a poem.
Good poems are coming out of the woodwork on this one. Excellent. By the way, I love the header picture.
a delight
a wonderful tanka
That was a gem of a tanka, Tumblewords.. so very dreamy, and yet so deep and rich...
A beautiful take on this magical magpie prompt!
wow, cute.
Wonderful imagery in this. Very nice.
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