wall deco
governs the hen house
...righteous eye
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Thursday, November 04, 2010
Senryu for Magpie Tales 39
Magpie Tales #39. Willow offers the following image for the weekly prompt.
wall deco
governs the hen house
...righteous eye
wall deco
governs the hen house
...righteous eye
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Like how you picked the words 'righteous eye' for the left (sinister) eye!
oh very nice!
That is a very commanding eye!
There is something about that look, 'righteous' fits so well!
That looks like one of my mothers mean ole roosters. I wondered where he went.
eye wouldn't try nuthin' :)
A mighty righteous eye .... not sure I want to get into a stare down with him. Nicely written. Short and sweet.
On, an ICock watches IHens. IBetter watch out. Very nice.
Best wishes
Ralf
Sue,
Do you think he's a Monet, Rodin, or Matisse?
;)
rel
Righteous eye? Yes but mean too!
righteous eye? that's my question too.
baleful more like.
Love your site.
Gotta protect them women!
I mean...those hens.
love that righteous eye...bkm
I totally agree it is a righteous eye. :)
Perfect! Love "Wall Deco"! :)
He looks a little "cock-sure" of himself to me.
Ha ha! I can picture this rooster "keeping an eye out" for the hens.
An excellent piece. Roosters do have very beady eyes.
I think "governs" is hilarious. I love it.
-- Kay
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
More than clever..I feel I know this chicken!
Now that you have put it that way, that eye ACTUALLY makes the rooster look kinda righteous! It's like he is reprimanding one of the chicks for crossing the road without looking both ways! :)
Me likes your take on this Magpie!!! Nice!!
Wow. Really enjoyed this!
Beautifully put, righteous is exactly the right word for 'that look'.
Boy that certainly does go with the prompt that eye is watching!
oh I like this one!
Lovely.
He seems awfully proud, and yes rightous. Very cute magpie.
Great haiku! Righteous eye! Love it.
Righteous eye indeed....love this Tumblewords! :-)
ha. that is some eye isnt it?
The eye says it all as you have done!
The eye says it all as you have done!
Fantastic. And that wall called to you, too!
(p.s. I see in your profile that you are a fan of Leonard Cohen. I bought tickets for his Portland, OR, performance. The tour is wrapping up and I feel lucky to see him. I think I am more excited for this concert than any other in my life!)
I'd be trying to become part of the wall. Less visible - more chances of survival.
That right-eye is watching every move! Cock o' the walk!
Oh, no! Senryu! And I thought I'd just figured out Haiku!
Keep us guessing, righteous poet.
"RIghteous eye": love it!
A very scary righteous eye......he can keep his doodle-doos to himself that one.....!!
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