of mice and...
thin paper raincoat
damped by the topcoat season
sodden tactics shred
and mishandled ribs collapse
beneath the weight of the storm
Fractal created in Fractal Explorer, resized in Irfanview.
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Fractals Photos Poetry Prose Watercolor
Sunday, July 19, 2009
Tanka for Sunday Scribblings
of mice and...
thin paper raincoat
damped by the topcoat season
sodden tactics shred
and mishandled ribs collapse
beneath the weight of the storm
Fractal created in Fractal Explorer, resized in Irfanview.
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Great image ... love, love, love "mishandled ribs" !!
xx,
JP/deb
A marvellous storm of words there.
interesting images in this one Tumblewords. great write. have a nice day.
beneath the weight of the storm
marvellous and such a beautiful image
The life-cycle of many a plan.
How come ya so brilliant at this?
excellent tumble of words
whoooshh you blew me away!
The Bigger Plan
The collapse of the mishandled ribs beneath the weight of the storm...I like that!
Truly elegant. . .those mishandled ribs. I'm new to Tanka and I'm glad I was introduced by you :O)
Ah, the way of so many a plan...
but were they "the best laid.."?
Thin paper raincoat, huh? No wonder the plan failed.
speechless on this one tw...the weight of a storm...
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