wild roses
green stretches of thorns
thistle climbs
***
pre-loved
unknown and adored
grandchild
~~~♥~~~♥~~~
Fractals Photos Poetry Prose Watercolor
Monday, July 06, 2009
Haiku for One Single Impression
One Single Impression posts: "The stranger" is this weeks prompt, courtesy of Beth Patterson, whose blog is Virtual Tea House. Thank you, Beth!
wild roses
green stretches of thorns
thistle climbs
***
pre-loved
unknown and adored
grandchild
wild roses
green stretches of thorns
thistle climbs
***
pre-loved
unknown and adored
grandchild
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17 comments:
Great words. Especially the second.
These are wonderful. I love "pre-loved"!
they are both lovely,, but that second one is such an eloquent statement for the prompt.. you are so clever sue!!!!
Both are so beautiful, as well as the photograph!
these haiku are great. the second one made me realize I would love my grandchild before she/ he was born too. I look forward to meeting her/ him. have a great night.
Hi Sue, within three weeks we may become new grandparents again. I hadn't thought of it before but [??????] is already loved by us all.
Especially her big-12-year-old sister. You should read the tribute she wrote to her new sis/brother.
And now you're into the sticky blooms. I can see them even without your fine picture.
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Beautiful.. Great use of the prompt there! Loved the verses, specially the second one...
ah...lovely...
the second ku is filled with emotions. very beautiful
this has a lovely cadence to it.
Your haiku are always so full of emotion. So much vividness packed into so few words. Wonderful.
A very unique interpretation of this prompt. Loved it!
Loved these- and so true for the second one...little stranger that becomes loved and adored...
misterious and lovely!
with the picture works sweetly. like the humour of it.
what if it were "Scotch wild rose" to make a play with resolving into scotch thistle at the end.
Beautiful. This child is no stranger. a rose that makes its bed blindly climbing into your heart.
Sweet. I particularly love the first one.
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