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Wednesday, April 29, 2009

Poem for Totally Optional Prompts



Totally Optional Prompts post: Let's write about exercise this week.







Orphaned Thoughts

ghosts of threat
...promise carrots and
wield small sticks
treadmill hugs the wall

books lean against weights
...flexible rubber tubing
on scattered tables
pleads for a stretch

she expects to work out
...doesn't know for sure
when dust buried
thoughts of good intent





Watercolor by Sue.


♣~~~♣~~~♣

9 comments:

anthonynorth said...

You've done a work out on the mind nicely here.

Rinkly Rimes said...

I never get as far as even THINKING about it!

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Sounds like my shed, 'cos that's where my exercise stuff has been relegated to!

Tammie Lee said...

Your watercolor is lovely, as is your poem. I bet this tale is quite quite common! ;-)

Kristy Worden said...

Yours are always the best!

Geraldine said...

This is great Sue! And great minds do think alike (my post and yours re: exercise etc...) You've made my day.

Hugs, G

paisley said...

i never even bothered to buy the props!!!! love this one.....

Beloved Dreamer said...

Sue, I know that I am late but wanted to tell you your poem as always is outstanding. Also I just love your water color. You are so gifted.


love, Melanie

Linda - Nickers and Ink said...

How many calories can we burn, just planning to exercise?

Doesn't that count for something?


;-)


By the way, I just gave you an award - check it out here:

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Blessings,
Linda