One Single Impression post: Thanks to Sue of Sunflower Roots for this week's prompt, live water.
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spring runoff
floods low flung washes
lichen spreads
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harmonics
six degrees of water
hazy chords
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swollen air
rolls across the sky -
shedding rain
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Watercolor by Sue.
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i like your parallel with music and nature in your second piece!!
Great takes on water - as always.
"Six degrees of water" - what a wonderful line.
'Lichen spreads' 'Swollen air', Simple and sweet, Love it.
Sue, these are all perfect. That second one resonates with me... *smile* Number three is happnening right now!
Many waterfalls have I communed with and come away renewed.
Beautiful image and I like the musical one too. I also enjoy communing with waterfalls.
Each piece is lovely. Together they evoke a gentle awakening. Isn't it wonderful when the swollen skies open?!!
Lovely haikus and wonderful painting!!!
loved all four!
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i paused on the second...such a gentle thought of a babbling brook came to mind...
but the third! wow!! my son is a meteorologist-in-the-making & i live those words, especially this time of year. wonderful!!!
Loved them all...especially the third one. The "swollen air" is "shedding rain" here tonight--April showers, I guess.
I love the picture, too. It is a perfect complement to the verses. Another great post.
lovely... a painting bob ross would smile at....
you create magic with least words ;)
The spring, the rain and the fresh thoughts that you inspire...Great work.
Thanks for stopping by at my page and leaving your views..Appreciate that.
Such talent- love the poems- especially the 2nd one and the image- beautiful!
The imagery of the second poem is very well done. I can see the ripples. Such an interesting take on it.
A gorgeous waterfall. These images make me think of the fulness, the now is the time, of spring.
swollen air... I have seen far too much swollen air in the last two weeks! A wonderful way to decribe clouds. What a lovely watercolor, too!
"Six degrees of water" - a wonderful line for sure ..
What Zoya said :-). It IS a wonderful line!
lovely painting.
Your first poem tells of my world today.
'swollen air' is a wonderful description.
What really sings in these haiku is the vitality of the water...these are lovely and the watercolor is gorgeous too.
Thank you!!
"harmonics
six degrees of water
hazy chords"
I love this, so very unique.
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