in the space of dark
where the faults
live unfettered
a flinch was dotted
by shrug and pout
one denial frittered
dawn pressed eject
exposed the blemish
as guilt grew a pardon
Michelle at Poefusion Friday 5 offers the following words for today's prompt: blemish, eject, flinch, pout, dot
She never fails to select words that jostle the imagination.
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8 comments:
Another excellent write, Tumblewords. I love how your mind works. It's so intricate. Thanks for sharing. Have a nice day.
this is a great approach to beautiful story...
Your way with words is, I'm wordless sometimes, I just love how you combine them, Susan.
The light of day exposes many blemishes - none here!
For me it was the last verse. Very thought-provoking.
Beautiful art Sue, rich in color! Words we can all share, lovely!
Hugs Sherrie
in the space of dark
where the faults
live unfettered
i am thinking i am stuck in here,, in this very place right this moment....
a flinched was dotted- love that, though I cannot exactly pinpoint the meaning of the whole piece, I do like how it is read and arranged
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