ancient enemy
a vague discomfort buried
bursts like shattered glass
3 Word Wednesday posts these three words today: vague, enemy, shatter. Thanks to ThomG at Surface Tensions. Come play along with us!
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Fractals Photos Poetry Prose Watercolor
Wednesday, December 10, 2008
Nightmare 101
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The artwork makes me think of physical pain, and a physical ailment or enemy "buried" within. But it works for a psychological or emotional conflict as well.
The emotional conflict in this is profound. Yet in so few words.
Excellent.
I do too, like the fact that the reader can take this piece in several ways. Like your own demons.
ahh nice! :D
Great sense of struggling inner tensions that need to burst out to fade out!
Yes, this works on a physical and emotional level and the last line is very powerful.
makes me think of someone's past catching up with them no matter the distance that they put between it
it made me think of anger, like fueding groups of people upon sight of eachother their anger unleashes and a usually rational person become irrational due to pride.
now this is an unusual meme. you put your words together great ;)
nice .. this is a haiku i suppose ...
You've said so much in these few words.
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