For Friday Haiku
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fists of rain
pummel spring's
first greens
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robin tugs
unwrinkles earthworm
...one winner
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Saturday, April 05, 2008
Haiku Friday Duo
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16 comments:
Very nice!
Your haiku is truly poetry. :)
Mine . . . is a fun 5-7-5 syllable game, a way to narrate a story usually.
I enjoy your picturesque language. :)
That word "pummel" seems to scream out.
And the one winner - such incredible, wry poignancy.
Gemma
Yes, those poor earthworms. Between being flooded out by the spring rains and being eaten by robins they don't know what's happening! :)
"unwrinkled earthworm"
Oh I do love that line. Gorgeous 'ku!
thanks for stopping by my Haiku Friday! I noticed you were from Idaho . . . when I was a little, little girl I lived in Bonners Ferry for awhile. Fond memories.
I really enjoy your poetry!
You are very talented.
Thanks for sharing
Beautiful haiku and very poetic. We are seeing a lot of that rain this early spring, too.
excellent lines in each....
fists of rain...
unwrinkles earthworm....
I agree with paisley.
Amazing....loved both :) We're getting a ton rain here too! Have a great weekend.
Gorgeous.
Gorgeous Haiku...
So nice to meet you!
lovely images
evoked by your poetry
talented you are
For those of us who 'play' on Fridays, your hiaga inspire ;--)
Thanks for your visit to Sacred Ruminations and your feedback on my tennis 'ku.
Hugs and blessings,
beautiful photo
I like the image of fists of rain pummel first green
truly lovely
Incredible... inimitably so! loved these!
Love the first, pummel is just right.
great ku!
Thanks for stopping by. I'm sorry I haven't been by sooner, but I've had wicked migraines from all the pollen here. Sigh...
See you on HF!
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