curdled clouds
scatter phantom shapes
…humpbacked moon
Prompt from One Deep Breath Poetry
Cedar Creek Moon, Digital Photo by Sue
curdled clouds
scatter phantom shapes
…humpbacked moon
Prompt from One Deep Breath Poetry
Cedar Creek Moon, Digital Photo by Sue
15 comments:
Stunning picture. Creepy kinda. :)
I like the picture, it looks like an eye.
I'll have my haiku for this week posted tomorrow.
Quite an evocative 'ku; very fitting for tonight's full moon!
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Left me breathless. I expected to see something slide out from behind the moon.
Loved this. I like the line humpback moon.
Yes, the picture is amazing! Phantom is a great word to use in your ku about this picture!
Wow, what a picture ... in the haiku, I mean. "...humpbacked moon." wow again
Fantastic take on visual contrast and with the moon so full and bright lately! Thank you ;)
I love your choice of descriptions here
"curdled clouds" is a wonderful description! And "humpbacked moon" is fantastic -- terrific haiku!! And the photo is really striking.
:)
Amazingly stunning ;o]
I very much enjoyed this haiku.
The photo took my breath away. Absolutely beautiful. The haiku fits it perfectly.
I love your words, and your pictures add so deeply to what you're saying.
Lovely. Just... lovely.
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