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the simplest way to tell a tale,well done.:)
Nice...I read it out loud...twice...
superb...honestly...great textures in this...each line twisting out the tale a bit more...
indeed a very nice haiku....thanks for sharing
I like this a lot ! short and sweetto the point. Thanks.
oh, that was nice, very nice
You always do this so well - I was compelled to read this again and again, seeing something new each time...
such well chosen wordsright on the money=)
I enjoyed the depth of allusions and the economy of words. Very expressive. Yours is always a wonderful blog to visit, Tumblewords. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you for this, Iliked it. Where in Idaho do you live? I lived in Nampa for about fourteen years.http://wanderwithoutbeinglost.blogspot.com/2012/02/grave-so-fine.htmlWander
Sue,"shadow rites" beautiful image.rel
Love this Haiku. Such a wonderful word image extracted from the prompt.
Claret chords ... how beautiful.
I love your choice of the word claret; it has an elegance and a cutting sound at the same time.
The more I read this the more it means - which is not easy to do in a haiku. (Understatement of the year!)
Very pretty short-form haiku. I like it.
You've managed to say a lot with a little...
Wonderfully done.Anna :o]
I read it aloud also! Well done.
I love this haiku. Shadow rites...wonderful. Thank you.
Oh, isn't this intriguing? Love it Sue.
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