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Once Upon a Waterfront
a disloyal performance
like any child can plan
with blocks and stackables
build it up to watch it fall
ropes have no use when
stilts dismantle upper floors
with squeeze, a sigh and sob
hoarse cries immerse all hope
its name a dead giveaway
Washaway land vanishes
when each rain drops
cliffs topple swiftly to the sea
News: http://www.ecy.wa.gov/programs/sea/coast/erosion/washaway.html
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These lines make me feel so tender.
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stilts dismantle upper floors
with squeeze, a sigh and sob
hoarse cries immerse all hope
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Beautiful work... albeit sad and a bit achy. In other words, your words worked well, today, again.
My Poem may be found here.
Susan a beautifully put together piece. I didn't even notice the wordle words. I am wishing you and yours a love-filled holiday.
Pamela
I like that you used a news story for inspiration. Nice work.
Yes, I think. And my heart dissolves into your words.
So beautiful..
dead woman and her wants
"its name a dead giveaway
Washaway land vanishes
when each rain drops
cliffs topple swiftly to the sea"
Amazing piece of work..
Merry Christmas :)
Washaway land vanishes! Such beauty insight & sound.
Yes mi dawlin',..certainly has the ring of humpty dumpty about it.
Excellent poem!We have a saying down here
" There are no flies on you!"
(complimentary...means you are very astute. )
Simple and effective!
lovely poem...smooth flow
So nice. Leaves a good feeling Tumble.
Happy New Year.
Shail
You are invited to join POW next Wednesday. Hope to see you there .
Happy New Year!
Cheers
Rall
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