Read Write Poem offers this Wordle for prompt #92. Thanks RWP!
A quick write, but I used all the words. You can probably tell where my mind has been lately. :)
Hip Hip Hooray
one husk of human
picked the piker's plum
a scofflaw at heart
with pittance for a soul
Bernie didn't conform
basked in a sweet clover limelight
professed to sleep at night
without a doctor's remedy
but from jail's extended stop
this bane of the multitude carps
there's no escape file baked
inside Friday night's confection
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21 comments:
welcome....nicely done
I have a bit of affection for poor Bernie. If I could bake, I might send him that file :). I like the line "this bane of the multitude carps". A fun read.
Such a fun read and nice one.
I like the opening couplet especially, both for sound and content.
Very funny and wry.
Great use of the wordle. Excellently done.
Your flow of words here is very nice. Thanks for participating!
This reads especially well aloud: "picked the piker's plum" & "this bane of the multitude carps". Thanks for the jaunt!
Poor Bernie. Sounds like he might be awhile getting that file. Fun read. Have a great weekend.
I love the image of "sweet clover limelight" it contrasts nicely with the image of a jail. Very nice.
I liked the pittance of a soul and the jail's "extended stop".
You can never do wrong. This is very good.
for a pittance, you buy that confection
Fun one. Thanks.
That was a great poem! it flows so well! and a fun fun read...
funny and fun
great one
shraddha
I like a lot visual poetry, of course I am refering to the first part of this.
And I think you wrote a good poem, with interesting words, a nice sound and a slightly intriguing semantic content over all.
Take care
I liked this poem and even more the second time, when I knew what it was about. Then the first four lines became my favorite.
The beginning sounds like an alliterative tongue-twister -- you manage to put together words that twist the mind and ear!
from Therese B. at RWP -- Sorry I forgot to put my name to the last comment which was mine -- the one about alliterative tongue-twisters.
Very nice indeed! It's great to see ya on RWP!
I like how you end this one. Great work.
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