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Sunday, September 06, 2009

Haiku for One Single Impression

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One Single Impression posts: Thanks to Geraldine of My Poetic Path for this week's prompt, romance. Please visit Geraldine's blog here to read her contribution.




green leaves yellow
autumn brushes sumac
preps new canvas

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summer dance
she came to wander
music breaks

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salsa dance
lanquid days of love
yield to fall

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Original watercolor by Sue.
My poetry books North of Summer and South of Winter are currently available at Amazon and, as always, available from my LuluBookstore in print or as download.

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18 comments:

Jeeves said...

Languid days of love yield to fall. Just brilliant

Jim said...

Nice trilogy here, Sue. My pick is the second one and then pray that summer never ends!
Optimist Jim speaking here. :-)
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Amias said...

Sue I am amaze at your art .. this one is so very beautiful ... I can't take my eyes off it.

I like the last haiku the most ..it speaks to me.

anthonynorth said...

Yes, that last one is exceptional. Loved it.

zoya gautam said...

.. very nice ..

Sweetest in the Gale said...

Delightful, as always!

totomai said...

2nd ku is enchanting

SandyCarlson said...

Each permutation offers something new and magical and wonderful. Thank you for filling my evening with smiles.

if said...

nice images...!!

Tammie Lee said...

your art is full of the colors of summer and fall, a mix- wonderful.
each poem is a wonderful tribute. the last really calls to me.

Leo said...

just very wonderful! :)

Michelle Johnson said...

really nice response to the prompt. i like that first haiku best. keep up the good work. have a great day.

Beth P. said...

oh my! this whole piece is lovely--the art and the words--

methinks you have sold yourself short on the 'romance' department!!

Beloved Haiku Dreams said...

Sue, I really loved these Haiku. Each seem to flow so gracefully into the other. Your art is amazing and fits well with your poems. Beautiful.


love-Melanie-bhd

Geraldine said...

wonderful work Sue. I especially loved the third haiku; what a perfect take on this prompt!!!

Patti said...

I love them all but I think the first one is my favorite! I love fall and I love the idea of a new canvas being prepped...maybe it will look like your beautiful artwork!

gabrielle said...

each ku is wonderful, ripening into the next. the visual canvas is exquisite.

fourwindshaiga said...

These have to be among your best, Sue. I can't pick a favorite.