unwritten folly
delivered by hostile voice
ordinary crime
VOLLEYED BY FOLLY
ordinary crime
hostile voice delivery
unwritten folly
NaisaiKu
CYCLIKU!
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Wednesday, June 03, 2009
NaisaiKu for 3WW
ThomG, moderator of 3WordWednesday offers the following words as prompt: Folly, Hostile and Ordinary
unwritten folly
delivered by hostile voice
ordinary crime
VOLLEYED BY FOLLY
ordinary crime
hostile voice delivery
unwritten folly
NaisaiKu
CYCLIKU!
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unwritten folly
delivered by hostile voice
ordinary crime
VOLLEYED BY FOLLY
ordinary crime
hostile voice delivery
unwritten folly
NaisaiKu
CYCLIKU!
Fractal image created in Fractal Explorer.
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13 comments:
I really like this. A volley of folly with a hostile voice. And it is an ordinary crime, sadly.
these naisaiKu poems are so intriguing.
oh, I like it!
"unwritten folly" and "hostile voice" are great images!
i don't understand this form, however, it doesn't distract from my enjoyment.
The word use is exceptional here. Definitely no folly.
Hi love the way you got the three little words in, and what an amazing TITLE! Also, the turn around on the second and sixth line, works so well.
Nice poem and Nice image too :)
Your words reflect a haunting, ominous cycle! Great write!
Wonderful..
"Volleyed by folly"
mirror cracked from side to side
very cleverly done.. i love the close rewording...
i am learning so much from you (participants of 3WW)...naisaiKu is on my wish list.
Likewise, I don't get the form, but it doesn't detract at all from the fact that I like it.
hello tw... love them words and the form is a kick with a punch... not directed towards anyone of course just an expression... had the desire to read it over a few times... and that fractal is filled with brilliant colors making the post and topic oh so more interesting..
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