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Wednesday, June 03, 2009

NaisaiKu for 3WW

ThomG, moderator of 3WordWednesday offers the following words as prompt: Folly, Hostile and Ordinary





unwritten folly
delivered by hostile voice
ordinary crime
VOLLEYED BY FOLLY
ordinary crime
hostile voice delivery
unwritten folly


NaisaiKu
CYCLIKU!

Fractal image created in Fractal Explorer.

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13 comments:

ThomG said...

I really like this. A volley of folly with a hostile voice. And it is an ordinary crime, sadly.

sarah said...

these naisaiKu poems are so intriguing.

angie said...

oh, I like it!
"unwritten folly" and "hostile voice" are great images!

quin browne said...

i don't understand this form, however, it doesn't distract from my enjoyment.

anthonynorth said...

The word use is exceptional here. Definitely no folly.

Andy Sewina said...

Hi love the way you got the three little words in, and what an amazing TITLE! Also, the turn around on the second and sixth line, works so well.

Megha said...

Nice poem and Nice image too :)

Greyscale Territory said...

Your words reflect a haunting, ominous cycle! Great write!

gautami tripathy said...

Wonderful..

"Volleyed by folly"

mirror cracked from side to side

paisley said...

very cleverly done.. i love the close rewording...

Life without Clots said...

i am learning so much from you (participants of 3WW)...naisaiKu is on my wish list.

Radio Nowhere said...

Likewise, I don't get the form, but it doesn't detract at all from the fact that I like it.

one more believer said...

hello tw... love them words and the form is a kick with a punch... not directed towards anyone of course just an expression... had the desire to read it over a few times... and that fractal is filled with brilliant colors making the post and topic oh so more interesting..