One Single Impression posts the prompt: 'word', courtesy of Jeeves of Silence is Poetic !
today's espresso
fires my mind, froth wakes my tongue
fails to sweeten words
~~~♥~~~♥~~~
today's espresso
fires my mind, froth wakes my tongue
fails to sweeten words
~~~♥~~~♥~~~
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18 comments:
Tumblewords, you have such command over this form.
Yes, I know the feeling. I'm having to dig deep to find some sweet words for a certain someone right now. Interesting picture, and take on the prompt.
Oh no...this was too good! Love it-
Know the feeling! Sometimes too alert is not a good thing--for anyone looking for sweet words.
Wow, does that sound good right now.
but it makes for one tight haiku huh???
Ah, those sweet words often have a bitter taste ;-)
Loved this.
We wouldn't love you as much if your words got too sweet!!
Dear one!
You do this so well!
Wow...
Have you tried changing your coffee brand? (smiles!)
Now that is what my lattes are all about. And is that a haloed angel I see on the pink background?
Love this one:)
Wow! the sensation was so abrupt, like I was that person in your poem...well done...loved it
I know this! Sometimes the mix just fires you up. Great, great.
your words remind me of times when things just don't pan out as i had hoped...
Great job...ooo I could go for one right now- I am freezing! Excellent interpretation of the prompt!
An excellent example of Senryu. Thanks for sharing.
very well expressed..many thanks ..
That's what they say, Sue. But after almost two weeks that espresso does everything now.
I'm writing from Honfleur, France, tonight. I should be back to read OSI blogs by sometime next week.
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