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Tuesday, March 05, 2013

Senryu for Magpie Tales #158



Thanks, Tess Kincaid, for the image prompt.


photo by TheFoxAndTheRaven




the wrong day
she grasped at the dawn
no returns

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8 comments:

Jim said...

Poor soul. I like your Senryƫ. Has that ever happened to you? I slept 25 hours one day after being up for 50 plus hours doing volunteer work at an Omaha flood site. It is a strange feeling.

Then too, when we passed over the International Date Line in January on our way to New Zealand we lost a whole day. That didn't bother me.

I have a picture of the International Date Line on one of my posts about our holiday (Jim's Little Blog).
I love your header watercolor picture.

Berowne said...

Troubled, forlorn - but well portrayed...

veggiesyarnsandtails said...

Oh so sad...beautifully expressed though.

turtlememoir said...

your few words tell a longish tale (potential if not actual) - well done

ladysknight said...

poignant despairing Senyru

~T~ said...

Oh, dear...

Tess Kincaid said...

Mercury must be in retrograde...

anthonynorth said...

Definitely no going back. Great words.