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Sunday, September 09, 2012

Storm for Sunday Whirl #73

Thanks, Brenda, for the Wordle Prompt!






once upon a rugged morning
out of a remote meadow
where splendor shook its grace
and thunder rolled a blessing
a deep shadow with an attitude
rolled down the ridge
across the marble markers
across the backs of silent cows
across the fierce warriors
suffering took a second seat
to that shadow with an attitude

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10 comments:

annell said...

I love this!!! Can see it all now!

nan said...

Great imagery and movement in this. Very creative take on the words.

Daydreamertoo said...

That must have been quite the storm. I love the description of it crossing the backs of the cows and rolling down the ridge.
Lovely.

Marianne said...

Wonderful poem! I love: "thunder rolled a blessing" and "a deep shadow with an attitude." Very creative!

undercaws.com said...

So... is it a "shadow-tude?" Ha! Sorry, I couldn't help myself. This is a gorgeous write. I love it.

soulsmusic said...

Love the movement and agree with Brenda, this is a gorgeous write, incredibly creative,

Elizabeth

Margo said...

My favourite phrase is 'where splendor shook its grace' but what I really love is your water colour!

flaubert said...

I too, enjoyed the movement in this poem, Susan.

Pamela

miskmask said...

Fantastic poem! One of my favourites.

Chris Lawrence said...

Wonderful imagery and flow