Tumblewords

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Monday, April 30, 2012

Ajar for Magpie Tales #115

Presented for prompt by Tess Kincaid, The Mag...

image by Manu Pombrol


Ajar


lost in time
one less rising tide
that man's cave

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18 comments:

Anonymous said...

This is beautiful and a very different take to the prompt! Love it!

Maggie said...

Ha, that man's cave!

Always a pleasure to see what you see, Tumblewords.

Anonymous said...

how neat!

Berowne said...

Well thought-out, well written.

Unknown said...

Oh, I so agree with Thingy..... it IS always a pleasure to see what you see, Tumblewords and I am fortunate to have been in two poetry groups with you. I love what you write. Thank you.

kaykuala said...

A good twist to the Prompt, Tumblewoods!

Hank

Brian Miller said...

an interesting take...i used to have a man cave...but lost a lot of time there...smiles.

Christine said...

nice one

Jinksy said...

Lost in book time, perhaps...

Silent Otto said...

Now that you point it out, he does seem lost in time

izzy said...

Love the idea of a cave!

~T~ said...

A good portrait of isolation. Nice!

Madeleine Begun Kane said...

Nice haiku!

Madeleine Begun Kane

Geraldine said...

Yes, very intriguing...and I love the photo too!

Tess Kincaid said...

Man cave indeed...I love that...

Anonymous said...

;) - love it!

Quiet Paths said...

That was a great twist with man cave at the end. What a singular image...

SandyCarlson said...

I feel sad for that man. What a great poem.