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This is just like the image of the shell, perfect and thought-provoking.
"Sound of the old tides." What a marvelous phrase.And "empty nest." What a cool, brilliant way of looking at that shell, as well as other things.
Ah, yes. The empty nest. I know it well.
That was wonderful. :)
Wonderful.— KKay, Alberta, CanadaAn Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
This is an elegant haiku. So appropriate for this elegantly perfect, yet empty, little shell.
curling sigh is so inviting...
This is like a piece of music. For violin, I think, because the violin can reach up and out and ebb and flow like the tide. Beautiful.
very cool! short and deep--xxxj
…a wonderful haiku my friend…and indeed those sounds of old tides are really true…i enjoyed the read. Thank you.(:~Kelvin
Nifty wee number!
This is perfection:-)
Nice tight poem!
I love this one...
so beautiful with a touch of melancholy. Love it!
"sound of the old tides" - so much power in such few words. it's stunning.
What a lovely haiku!Mad Kane
Love this! It was an immediately power-punch to the heart!
You have made empty nest sound like a lovely stage of life ... encouraging for those still facing it.
Oooh, you really got me with this one! A lovely and haunting little surprise package.
This is perfection Sue! LOVE IT.
Gorgeous haiku =)
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