Life Lines
stain-formed fractals
test the Jung and Freud
wrinkles hugging lint
while
origami layers enfold
dark and bitter defects
and agitate her sins
tangled strands of self
spin a thousand cuts
she spills not a single word
stain-formed fractals
test the Jung and Freud
wrinkles hugging lint
while
origami layers enfold
dark and bitter defects
and agitate her sins
tangled strands of self
spin a thousand cuts
she spills not a single word
Image created in Apophysis, resized in Irfanview.
~~~♥~~~♥~~~
10 comments:
tangled strands of self
spin a thousand cuts
she spills not a single word
This lines are just brilliant.
i was thinking laundry and then you just dazzled me...
shraddha
WOW!
Your fractal certainly whirrs!
You might like this one........
http://rinklyrimes.blogspot.com/2008/10/155blowing-in-wind.html
some really great lines in this one. keep up the good work. have a great night.
This one has my mind spinning...
Very nice! I never think about laundry as a metaphor even though we have the built in metaphor of "airing dirty linens in public" (not quite laundry, but close...).
Wonderfully concise and strong.
I love that last line! And the "origami layers" too!
I really loved this one on so many levels. Using laundry to delve into someone's psyche was a very creative choice for this prompt.
Have a great day,
Jane
Excellent imagery. Love that last line.
Peace,
JP/deb
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