One Single Impression posts: Thanks to Sweetest in the Gale (formerly Fledgling Poet) for this week's prompt, ocean. Feel free to follow the links and play along and/or to read some fine writings.
emotive tides
unbound by monthly moon
re-write the shore
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swirling blues
rock seaweed to and fro
Gaia's cradle
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Image was created on Bamboo Fun Tablet with Adobe Photoshop Elements, resized and buttoned in Irfanview.
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23 comments:
Love both of these. Gaia's cradle is a great term.
i like the idea of rewriting the shore
beautiful words!
and I love the art...
Yes, it does! I like this haiku very much Sue, and that art is great. I see a dolphin, and three water creature up from the waves.
beautiful words..so few, so perfect..when put together this way..
your talent impresses me very very much..
Oh, I love that line, "rewrite the shore"!
Kat
Love both of these! I'm with Poetikat...love that line!
both pieces are wonderful bits of ocean. Your art accompanies these wonderfully.
Beautiful words
I like this much
Chaos and Eros I know
Gaia here I learned
mother of the earth
Gaia and Uranus sire
offspring so many
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I will let these and the others rest:
Chaos, Aether, Gaia, Uranus,
Hemera, Chronos, Eros, Erebus,
Nyx, Ophion, Tartarus, and Phanes.
"Simple Simon went a-fishing
For to catch a whale;
All the water he could find
Was in his mother's pail!"
This is me and Greek mythology.
My mom's pail is mostly Wikipedia.
Thanks, I wish I would read a book a day like you do.
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Gaia, Wikipedia Greek mythology reference
Amazing and wonderful. Gaia's cradle is a wonderful image--a strong and beautiful, intuitive and subtle beauty.
I particularly like the second one.
Gorgeous...the first one is my favorite! "Unbound by monthly moon" and "re-write the shore"...oh, I love those lines!
Rewrite the shore..
LOved that!
ravens chase out thoughts from the mind
Loved both of these, especially the second one. The artwork in stunning!
Hugs, G
I wish I could say something clever and original, but Sweetest in the Gale said it perfectly... those particular lines are divine!
poised expressions ..
listening deeply. scripting.
In Gaias cradle. re-writing the shore.
Beautiful!
I love both of these, could feel the last one ... the photo is mind catching.
Both words and art fetch the reader's attention with their strong images and rewritten shores. Well done.
rewrite the shore... that is just as it is... beautiful...
As said by other...love the image of Gaia's cradle. Lovely.
These two haikus seem to hurl then and now into a time warp! beautiful!
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