a goodtime girl
aglow with smiles
outside a gossip's heart
her afterwords
marked by meddle
sometimes did ripen
form damaging debris
unchecked by sudsy rinse
or 'not-I' chuckle
***
Michelle at Poefusion Friday 5 offers the following words for prompt:
meddle
afterwords
debris
rinse
ripen
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Friday, October 31, 2008
Goodtime Girl
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Read several times to get the feel of it. I like it!
Five words and you develop a whole story and history. Great job.
You gave me a good time!Thanks.
I always read your poems outloud. This one rolls so nicely off the tongue.
Sherry
and i for one maintain that even in hindsight,, i would rather have been the good time girl,, that the meddling gossip......
great write sue!!
I am amazed that you got all those words in. And I like the poem!
Hello Tumblewords~ You always make such good use of those five words. I think we all can relate to that kind of girl, can't we? Well done. Have a nice weekend.
A lovely poem.
Wonderful use of the prompt words! You wove them together with such skill!
I am particularly struck by this combination:
"her afterwords/marked by meddle"
Such a creative and unique use of words.
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