Michelle at Poefusion Friday 5 offers these words for prompt:
doctor * roll of film * stairwell * telephone * secret
I found these words more conducive to a short story than poetry! What do you find?
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the escape stairwell echoed
clatter made by a roll of film
unwinding down the steps
a scrubs clad doctor slipped
through the morgue's swinging door
into a nearby telephone stand
dialed a familiar number
whispered, 'We're safe ~
our secret has seen the light.'
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10 comments:
what secret's that? that's what I like to know!
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that secret should come out in a short story or novel, i think. this has enough mystery to pull you right in and make you want more. thanks for sharing. have a nice weekend.
This is ingenious. You are so clever with words.
clever!!! heres to celebrating "exposing" oneself in stairwells!!! LOL!!!!
A nice take on the prompt; your poem is intriguing:)
That was surreal! The images of film and phone boxes took this to another time for me. Great stuff.
Sue,
Very clever. Dr. McDreamy saved by a stairwell exposure. Next time I'll record his trysts with my digital. ;)
Well done my lady.
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I know what you mean about the words, but you managed to create a poem. I love the opening sounds of the roll of film clattering. Great mystery.
that was a great story that has come to light!
It's no longer a secret.
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