tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post9209317861381642985..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: Others for BigTent PoetryTumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-4001365165205392072010-08-09T21:03:31.822-07:002010-08-09T21:03:31.822-07:00Such a beautiful, vivid image. It's the kind t...Such a beautiful, vivid image. It's the kind that my mind wanders over and back again.Debhttp://stoneymoss.org/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-14355140607477777582010-08-09T15:35:46.659-07:002010-08-09T15:35:46.659-07:00I love your images of loose pearls and tarnished s...I love your images of loose pearls and tarnished silver. Poignant!Paul Oakleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17426789386840488470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-71012198884075095162010-08-09T05:28:24.104-07:002010-08-09T05:28:24.104-07:00Beautiful images in a quiet distlled piece. Really...Beautiful images in a quiet distlled piece. Really enjoyed this piece.Lindahttp://word-painting.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-45846122437019513462010-08-08T19:26:30.013-07:002010-08-08T19:26:30.013-07:00So elegantly written, and I love the that ending....So elegantly written, and I love the that ending.Francis Scudellarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-17125194298276031542010-08-08T18:26:52.643-07:002010-08-08T18:26:52.643-07:00Like the turn about and the wisdom.
ElizabethLike the turn about and the wisdom.<br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://intuitivepaths.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-32329317835042322692010-08-08T18:11:40.452-07:002010-08-08T18:11:40.452-07:00Simple and thought-provoking. Great style!Simple and thought-provoking. Great style!irenehttp://enerihot.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-91480756337268085842010-08-08T12:39:59.785-07:002010-08-08T12:39:59.785-07:00I think if this is what happens when you break the...I think if this is what happens when you break the mold, you should do it more often. :DJoseph Harkerhttp://namingconstellations.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-43108490140748639882010-08-07T21:28:14.020-07:002010-08-07T21:28:14.020-07:00How long forever lasts...Like it....How long forever lasts...Like it....Jeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-11105626693225040602010-08-07T20:02:15.510-07:002010-08-07T20:02:15.510-07:00A very enjoyable read!
now it is there, now it is...A very enjoyable read!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2010/08/now-it-there-no-it-isnt.html" rel="nofollow">now it is there, now it isn't</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-80314241528546131692010-08-07T19:03:42.621-07:002010-08-07T19:03:42.621-07:00Beautiful and thought-provoking poem!Beautiful and thought-provoking poem!Diane Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15886778060199433214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-19567139691072080682010-08-07T18:50:45.027-07:002010-08-07T18:50:45.027-07:00Forever is forever...and I am not sure I would lik...Forever is forever...and I am not sure I would like to stay around that long. Nice poem.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-46651868447026576422010-08-07T16:11:12.476-07:002010-08-07T16:11:12.476-07:00Hmm..Had a little trouble accessing comments so ho...Hmm..Had a little trouble accessing comments so hope this doesn't turn up duplicate -- just wanted to comment on the poem -- love the beautiful pearl imagery. Thanks!Leslie D.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13230161073862394332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-29808383672950783332010-08-07T10:32:46.383-07:002010-08-07T10:32:46.383-07:00I love the dreamlike feeling of this piece which y...I love the dreamlike feeling of this piece which you were to create with such brevity...very good!Cynthia Shorthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12386358503730817278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-60393110936150237052010-08-07T09:44:23.964-07:002010-08-07T09:44:23.964-07:00Beautiful and rich. Nice work!Beautiful and rich. Nice work!kellyhttp://www.starsandwillows.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-74390115876489007062010-08-07T09:13:54.223-07:002010-08-07T09:13:54.223-07:00I was intrigued that you said "Visit the link...I was intrigued that you said "Visit the link to see what others wrote!" and then called you poem 'Others'. So now, I'm thinking of myself as one of the "scattered pearls"! Lovely poem.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-28530995083663520252010-08-07T08:29:06.527-07:002010-08-07T08:29:06.527-07:00Susan a beautiful piece!
PamelaSusan a beautiful piece!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-32179757629111965922010-08-07T08:09:33.485-07:002010-08-07T08:09:33.485-07:00Walt Whitman tells us how important it is to honor...Walt Whitman tells us how important it is to honor the Other I Am. Your poem resonates with that reality. Thank you.<br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-75799806656044535192010-08-07T07:57:54.197-07:002010-08-07T07:57:54.197-07:00wonderful. have a great day.wonderful. have a great day.Naquillityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04784964201596357136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-7303674377963046572010-08-07T05:52:25.367-07:002010-08-07T05:52:25.367-07:00Yes, I liked it very much! Thank you. But to tel...Yes, I liked it very much! Thank you. But to tell the truth, I'm not sure I have a style, and would find it difficult to write in another style? Perhaps I haven't been writing long enough?annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-20430197092000940872010-08-07T04:18:22.845-07:002010-08-07T04:18:22.845-07:00love the sounds here: I can hear the rain hit and ...love the sounds here: I can hear the rain hit and the water run across the landEKSwitajhttp://www.elizabethkateswitaj.net/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-7255687168595873622010-08-07T01:02:08.013-07:002010-08-07T01:02:08.013-07:00Great use of metaphor. And brevity assures that e...Great use of metaphor. And brevity assures that every word counts.vivienne blakehttp://vivinfrance.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-62620896350520840462010-08-06T23:50:55.577-07:002010-08-06T23:50:55.577-07:00Well done! It's not easy to write fluently in ...Well done! It's not easy to write fluently in a style you might not normally choose - you have succeeded admirably :-)jabbloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-28461763187836652752010-08-06T20:17:02.235-07:002010-08-06T20:17:02.235-07:00Great post! Wonderfully written poem!
-WeaselGreat post! Wonderfully written poem!<br /><br />-WeaselWeaselhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12467584502095433332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-59665814711972075252010-08-06T19:52:41.286-07:002010-08-06T19:52:41.286-07:00Fine level of compaction & distillation, lady!...Fine level of compaction & distillation, lady! Bravo.Ron.http://rlavalette.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-27168286006790221882010-08-06T18:34:34.943-07:002010-08-06T18:34:34.943-07:00It's always beneficial to extend and change on...It's always beneficial to extend and change one's style, I find it keeps the writing fresh. And plus, there's nothing better than a challenge. I love your writing style here, it works very well - the poem is marvellous :)Sam Liuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01014838954712295981noreply@blogger.com