tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post8721614146523269664..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: Second Hand for Big TentTumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-34060496040697309402010-07-26T00:18:56.927-07:002010-07-26T00:18:56.927-07:00A beautiful poem, I read it aloud and it sounded s...A beautiful poem, I read it aloud and it sounded so very perfect and beautiful.Umahttp://umaathreya.blogsome.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-40822826663912972542010-07-25T08:08:24.184-07:002010-07-25T08:08:24.184-07:00Love the play between the stanzas.Love the play between the stanzas.EKSwitajhttp://www.elizabethkateswitaj.net/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-69849217842366670722010-07-24T11:30:58.692-07:002010-07-24T11:30:58.692-07:00i like how you've been able to imitate the ton...i like how you've been able to imitate the tone and haziness (mood) of the piece you selected while using different words/images!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-39826974263277229622010-07-24T10:59:32.147-07:002010-07-24T10:59:32.147-07:00hmmm.... nyc posthmmm.... nyc postAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-67187070081780298082010-07-24T08:37:01.174-07:002010-07-24T08:37:01.174-07:00very well done.
hope that you enjoy a fun Saturday...very well done.<br />hope that you enjoy a fun Saturday!Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-51841114309818479392010-07-24T07:50:23.805-07:002010-07-24T07:50:23.805-07:00Your imagery is beautiful, your metaphor sublime. ...Your imagery is beautiful, your metaphor sublime. I loved this line, "spell the links<br />in double whispers".Sam Liuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01014838954712295981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-87964452255241138532010-07-24T07:29:07.993-07:002010-07-24T07:29:07.993-07:00The rhythm of your lines adds to the mystery of th...The rhythm of your lines adds to the mystery of the words.Lindahttp://word-painting.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-61979022766569171612010-07-24T06:20:53.595-07:002010-07-24T06:20:53.595-07:00I had never read your favorite. Loved North of Mis...I had never read your favorite. Loved North of Mist. Your poem was excellent. I enjoyed watching the hands unfold and be interpreted through the time and space, and love the last stanza.nanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03445777687088584603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-1104283625897819362010-07-24T06:10:22.485-07:002010-07-24T06:10:22.485-07:00Lovely...Both poemsLovely...Both poemsJeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-36513949920466094182010-07-24T06:07:35.962-07:002010-07-24T06:07:35.962-07:00I've read both poems, and though the one you c...I've read both poems, and though the one you chose is a great piece, the one you wrote is an even better piece! A wonderful read!<br /><br />-Weasel<br />ps: you left a question on my blog of my piece. Did I save the work before I cut it down. I only have the 4 part version saved and not the ten part version. I'm leaving the link to the 4 part below if you would like to read it. Thanks for asking! :)<br /><br />http://systematicweasel.blogspot.com/2009/12/street-city-blues_23.htmlWeaselhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12467584502095433332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-31061743912489718732010-07-24T03:44:25.661-07:002010-07-24T03:44:25.661-07:00I think you did a good job here. http://thelaugh...I think you did a good job here. http://thelaughinghousewife.wordpress.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-50831138949622051902010-07-23T23:03:41.421-07:002010-07-23T23:03:41.421-07:00I definitely hear the inspiration. If I may make o...I definitely hear the inspiration. If I may make one suggestion...you have such wonderful images, but there are a few places where the meter breaks and takes me away from those images. I love the Escher stairs. It was so unexpected and yet perfect.Lindseyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00082772098562398737noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-55933095672012527522010-07-23T19:23:13.572-07:002010-07-23T19:23:13.572-07:00hi sue, a display of rich words that force one to ...hi sue, a display of rich words that force one to pause...one more believerhttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2010/07/23/running-hard/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-18267383314771549772010-07-23T18:17:15.416-07:002010-07-23T18:17:15.416-07:00Susan this is superb!
PamelaSusan this is superb!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-4374269207934744002010-07-23T16:10:30.029-07:002010-07-23T16:10:30.029-07:00I too, read both poems and dare I say it? Liked yo...I too, read both poems and dare I say it? Liked yours better. The rhythms are close, but I get a much deeper sense of the Practical/Surreal dichotomy from your poem. And that ending is like a slap of a card on a hard wooden table. <br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-4707484694420552432010-07-23T14:11:45.328-07:002010-07-23T14:11:45.328-07:00I like the air of mystery, and the way time seem t...I like the air of mystery, and the way time seem to flow in on itself.Francis Scudellarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-35455392459251414532010-07-23T13:34:49.957-07:002010-07-23T13:34:49.957-07:00i read both poems and your words are definitely in...i read both poems and your words are definitely inspired by 'North of Mist'. have a great day/ weekend.Naquillityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04784964201596357136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-48925972276282563492010-07-23T10:37:51.072-07:002010-07-23T10:37:51.072-07:00Read both poems--you did a fine job! (and the rhy...Read both poems--you did a fine job! (and the rhythm of Hiawatha runs thru my head as well)!Joyce Ellen Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13494251587598676788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-83973244058455078572010-07-23T09:05:13.815-07:002010-07-23T09:05:13.815-07:00One can certainly see and hear the inspiration. Ha...One can certainly see and hear the inspiration. Having read both poems, the rhythm of Hiawatha's Wedding Feast keeps running through my head!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.com