tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post797332388574090621..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: Poem for Read Write Poem 92Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-46845686921050505562009-09-22T05:40:53.673-07:002009-09-22T05:40:53.673-07:00I like how you end this one. Great work.I like how you end this one. Great work.Nathanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11552467037640904091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-30935283698455437802009-09-20T14:36:30.538-07:002009-09-20T14:36:30.538-07:00Very nice indeed! It's great to see ya on RWP!...Very nice indeed! It's great to see ya on RWP!Zouxzouxhttp://www.zouxzoux.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-61413728240794455182009-09-20T12:08:27.249-07:002009-09-20T12:08:27.249-07:00from Therese B. at RWP -- Sorry I forgot to put my...from Therese B. at RWP -- Sorry I forgot to put my name to the last comment which was mine -- the one about alliterative tongue-twisters.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-3510266855040526652009-09-20T12:07:51.262-07:002009-09-20T12:07:51.262-07:00The beginning sounds like an alliterative tongue-t...The beginning sounds like an alliterative tongue-twister -- you manage to put together words that twist the mind and ear!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-53086331332969461782009-09-20T06:59:14.082-07:002009-09-20T06:59:14.082-07:00I liked this poem and even more the second time, w...I liked this poem and even more the second time, when I knew what it was about. Then the first four lines became my favorite.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-9612529953287396242009-09-19T14:18:45.154-07:002009-09-19T14:18:45.154-07:00I like a lot visual poetry, of course I am referin...I like a lot visual poetry, of course I am refering to the first part of this. <br />And I think you wrote a good poem, with interesting words, a nice sound and a slightly intriguing semantic content over all.<br /><br />Take careMariana Sofferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13351209522681966230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-68164974594794050472009-09-18T21:37:37.206-07:002009-09-18T21:37:37.206-07:00funny and fun
great one
shraddhafunny and fun<br /><br />great one<br /><br />shraddhaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-53545873655326745272009-09-18T18:21:35.253-07:002009-09-18T18:21:35.253-07:00That was a great poem! it flows so well! and a fun...That was a great poem! it flows so well! and a fun fun read...Anya Padyamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05292308457359940182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-26072524996579415352009-09-18T17:45:56.064-07:002009-09-18T17:45:56.064-07:00Fun one. Thanks.Fun one. Thanks.Barbarahttp://briarcat.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-77820666905578151882009-09-18T17:19:46.481-07:002009-09-18T17:19:46.481-07:00You can never do wrong. This is very good.
for a ...You can never do wrong. This is very good.<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2009/09/for-pittance-you-buy-that-confection.html" rel="nofollow">for a pittance, you buy that confection</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-39039223977767450922009-09-18T14:30:12.190-07:002009-09-18T14:30:12.190-07:00I liked the pittance of a soul and the jail's ...I liked the pittance of a soul and the jail's "extended stop".Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-70492747825392055412009-09-18T12:25:31.788-07:002009-09-18T12:25:31.788-07:00I love the image of "sweet clover limelight&q...I love the image of "sweet clover limelight" it contrasts nicely with the image of a jail. Very nice.Jameshttp://coyotemercury.com/blog1noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-27975555911171061452009-09-18T06:53:45.076-07:002009-09-18T06:53:45.076-07:00Poor Bernie. Sounds like he might be awhile gettin...Poor Bernie. Sounds like he might be awhile getting that file. Fun read. Have a great weekend.poefusionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-37197972609957652132009-09-18T04:13:42.465-07:002009-09-18T04:13:42.465-07:00This reads especially well aloud: "picked the...This reads especially well aloud: "picked the piker's plum" & "this bane of the multitude carps". Thanks for the jaunt!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-69943862149172335802009-09-18T01:11:14.907-07:002009-09-18T01:11:14.907-07:00Your flow of words here is very nice. Thanks for ...Your flow of words here is very nice. Thanks for participating!Neil Reidhttp://bearlyaudible.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-44076007063126610372009-09-18T01:09:28.011-07:002009-09-18T01:09:28.011-07:00Great use of the wordle. Excellently done.Great use of the wordle. Excellently done.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-88076967227892784762009-09-18T00:23:54.400-07:002009-09-18T00:23:54.400-07:00Very funny and wry.Very funny and wry.Tamrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08016702051457729026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-21148523989629111162009-09-17T22:28:15.876-07:002009-09-17T22:28:15.876-07:00I like the opening couplet especially, both for so...I like the opening couplet especially, both for sound and content.EKSwitajhttp://www.elizabethkateswitaj.net/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-24165273510577956342009-09-17T21:40:48.147-07:002009-09-17T21:40:48.147-07:00Such a fun read and nice one.Such a fun read and nice one.Jeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-70815643143273742232009-09-17T20:02:06.414-07:002009-09-17T20:02:06.414-07:00I have a bit of affection for poor Bernie. If I co...I have a bit of affection for poor Bernie. If I could bake, I might send him that file :). I like the line "this bane of the multitude carps". A fun read.Francis Scudellarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-13823865524784865002009-09-17T20:01:01.813-07:002009-09-17T20:01:01.813-07:00welcome....nicely donewelcome....nicely doneWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.com