tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post7705875606073908189..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: Slush Pile for RWP #114Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-26846672730511799862010-02-21T21:43:35.688-08:002010-02-21T21:43:35.688-08:00Very nice! The last stanza is especially delightfu...Very nice! The last stanza is especially delightful.Zouxzouxhttp://www.zouxzoux.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-89325452275568839912010-02-21T08:16:22.598-08:002010-02-21T08:16:22.598-08:00It seems the frog lead us both down the twisted fa...It seems the frog lead us both down the twisted fairy tale path. I love the imagery and sounds, especially in the third stanza.Francis Scudellarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-25684893636622694642010-02-21T05:18:27.325-08:002010-02-21T05:18:27.325-08:00The alliteration and sassy word combinations make ...The alliteration and sassy word combinations make this poem dance!Wish I could let go of my literal mind and tap into some quirkiness. My brain is tickled!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-87853644445450106132010-02-20T20:20:39.866-08:002010-02-20T20:20:39.866-08:00I think I will try this tomorrow. It looks like s...I think I will try this tomorrow. It looks like so much fun. Remember the time the prompt was "conspinky". I can't remember where. But the nonsense that came out of that prompt was dazzling! <br /><br />I loved this poem...it just rolled over my right brain causing sparks everywhere. Grin!!!<br /><br />bb+ (Retire In Style Blog)https://www.blogger.com/profile/05114209481329773753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-47048668071930913742010-02-20T18:01:09.299-08:002010-02-20T18:01:09.299-08:00It has a nice ring to it. Not really being talente...It has a nice ring to it. Not really being talented in poetry myself, I m not so sure what it really means! Anything I write always manges to sound like a nursery rhyme.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08187066038297018869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-51459317497585970142010-02-20T15:23:50.479-08:002010-02-20T15:23:50.479-08:00That makes me smile. Very creative.
Best wishes
R...That makes me smile. Very creative.<br /><br />Best wishes<br />RalfRalf Brökerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08602494065251750620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-70174179349771111252010-02-20T11:40:06.155-08:002010-02-20T11:40:06.155-08:00I love the first and last line! All the ones in be...I love the first and last line! All the ones in between are good too, but those two especially. ^_^Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-34513154343634663522010-02-20T09:45:20.052-08:002010-02-20T09:45:20.052-08:00I'm with rallentanda on this! Great fun!
Love...I'm with rallentanda on this! Great fun!<br /><br />Love the "one footlocker croak."Paul Oakleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17426789386840488470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-920282981305991752010-02-19T16:39:07.594-08:002010-02-19T16:39:07.594-08:00"comes hopping, hopping down the blooming pat..."comes hopping, hopping down the blooming path" I love that! Nice work Susan.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-34134011832880796022010-02-19T15:47:31.247-08:002010-02-19T15:47:31.247-08:00fun poem with a tough set of words - nice!fun poem with a tough set of words - nice!Kaythttp://www.kaythoch.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-70016606859728806592010-02-19T10:14:12.191-08:002010-02-19T10:14:12.191-08:00The momeraths & borogroves thank you for the f...The momeraths & borogroves thank you for the frolic down memory lane--great fun!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-29198302150507008502010-02-19T02:50:24.302-08:002010-02-19T02:50:24.302-08:00Oh frabjous day callooh callay
she chortled in her...Oh frabjous day callooh callay<br />she chortled in her joy<br /><br />full of mimsy and whimsy...fun!rallentandanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-13715561536866928882010-02-18T23:39:04.804-08:002010-02-18T23:39:04.804-08:00How do I make my left brain turn tight so I can wr...How do I make my left brain turn tight so I can write poems and teach them too?<br /><br />I am teaching my 8 year olds about the brain, and later write poems. Not something I am looking forward to.Ann, Chen Jie Xue 陈洁雪https://www.blogger.com/profile/04399207312968010460noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-3171469934456976272010-02-18T15:29:38.941-08:002010-02-18T15:29:38.941-08:00Nice poem, it is fun to read.
It made me realiz...Nice poem, it is fun to read. <br /><br />It made me realize I missed the word "frog" though.<br /><br />Pat Slateryslatdang 2 2https://www.blogger.com/profile/06179511916412318228noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-71147153246486004252010-02-18T14:12:23.473-08:002010-02-18T14:12:23.473-08:00That was excellent, as always.That was excellent, as always.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-91853493328890011902010-02-18T13:19:11.106-08:002010-02-18T13:19:11.106-08:00Good work!Good work!Kirstyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04467950246646179449noreply@blogger.com