tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post552562858868976627..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: RegretsTumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-60842982582275010482009-02-03T00:55:00.000-08:002009-02-03T00:55:00.000-08:00Sue, I am wowed. All three of these are superb! Gr...Sue, I am wowed. All three of these are superb! Great variety.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-34695756016652100812009-02-03T00:08:00.000-08:002009-02-03T00:08:00.000-08:00wonderful haiku and painting, I love the depth in ...wonderful haiku and painting, I love the depth in the paintingCrafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-21199001071554724412009-02-02T16:03:00.000-08:002009-02-02T16:03:00.000-08:00What a lovely combination of art and poetry. The ...What a lovely combination of art and poetry. The first nature poem is so bleak, needfully so. The second was especially refreshing for me, the whole imagine of dropping away the old -- for the new!Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02014962960321024458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-72224787003134371472009-02-02T09:50:00.000-08:002009-02-02T09:50:00.000-08:00Did you write all this yourself?... You've got...Did you write all this yourself?... You've got something pretty amazing going on...<BR/><BR/>I'm definitely following THIS blog...<BR/><BR/>I used to pen poetry (v juvenile though and I've written nary a word for over 15 years...) nothing as good as yours here though... what a find this is!! <BR/>All the very best 2u<BR/>from<BR/>Gledwood<BR/>"Vol 2"...<BR/><BR/>;->...Gledwoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09308172310486574510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-66527343283782689182009-02-02T08:53:00.000-08:002009-02-02T08:53:00.000-08:00Tumblewords--Your stalwart forests holding secrets...Tumblewords--<BR/>Your stalwart forests holding secrets grabbed my heart and made me hold my breath for a second. <BR/><BR/>And to think that we cut them down with impunity without any regards to the wisdom they hold. It's no wonder we're in such deep do-do...<BR/><BR/>Lovely day to you, amiga--Beth P.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02621990661878989356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-48826092100256007122009-02-01T15:36:00.000-08:002009-02-01T15:36:00.000-08:00I have trouble writing poetry, therefore I conside...I have trouble writing poetry, therefore I consider it difficult, therefore I am in awe of your many consistenly good poems. All of both of these catch at me. Especially favorite hooks are the raucous crows/clocklike ticks; the light coming on after the night has bled; and dressing in faultless clothing to acquire fresh and novel sins. Bellissimo!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-24015383642676549772009-02-01T15:25:00.000-08:002009-02-01T15:25:00.000-08:00If only we could all be "stripped to innocent newn...If only we could all be "stripped to innocent newness". Beautifully written scribble.Roanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01841824351740989301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-7539862605038983992009-02-01T15:19:00.000-08:002009-02-01T15:19:00.000-08:00:D Good work!I bought a Bamboo fun tablet today. I...:D Good work!<BR/><BR/>I bought a Bamboo fun tablet today. It's rather fun!Noah the Greathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11777681562599472033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-70790965147295177952009-02-01T14:47:00.000-08:002009-02-01T14:47:00.000-08:00Both lovely. Like the imagery in the first one, c...Both lovely. Like the imagery in the first one, can relate emotionally more to the second one.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-80413655565832861782009-02-01T13:24:00.000-08:002009-02-01T13:24:00.000-08:00The artwork and your verses - magic! The second pi...The artwork and your verses - magic! The second piece in particular is just great.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-90078066442378522822009-02-01T09:52:00.000-08:002009-02-01T09:52:00.000-08:00I love your poetry, especially the second one. I w...I love your poetry, especially the second one. I wish I could write like that... but I don't yet regret it hehe :) Im still learningAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-31957625640807536202009-02-01T08:45:00.000-08:002009-02-01T08:45:00.000-08:00Loved the second one - like someone above said, it...Loved the second one - like someone above said, it felt more like me!Bee Beehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07758268384090421739noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-30670815072155656732009-02-01T08:28:00.000-08:002009-02-01T08:28:00.000-08:00Liked the second one. Excellent poetry!Liked the second one. Excellent poetry!gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-51858048148920558072009-02-01T01:03:00.000-08:002009-02-01T01:03:00.000-08:00Very nice one.Second one is very good. Each line h...Very nice one.Second one is very good. Each line has a story.Jeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-31259837969617547932009-02-01T00:59:00.000-08:002009-02-01T00:59:00.000-08:00Second one. How much said. Every line is a story. ...Second one. How much said. Every line is a story. BrilliantJeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-60343325027795853152009-02-01T00:58:00.000-08:002009-02-01T00:58:00.000-08:00Second one. How much said. Every line is a story. ...Second one. How much said. Every line is a story. BrilliantJeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-56766355890586814062009-01-31T22:57:00.000-08:002009-01-31T22:57:00.000-08:00the poem Faulting is very powerful.the poem Faulting is very powerful.totomaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01805083472267649276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-40344865954383182832009-01-31T20:59:00.000-08:002009-01-31T20:59:00.000-08:00wow nice write...loved these lines.....probing eac...wow nice write...<BR/>loved these lines.....probing each layer I peel my sins,<BR/>disrobing as if it were my body<BR/>remove timeworn transgressions<BR/>fold them neatly in special bins..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-5645974998836668192009-01-31T20:53:00.000-08:002009-01-31T20:53:00.000-08:00Whenever I read your poetry I decide to try my han...Whenever I read your poetry I decide to try my hand at Haiku but it just doesn't seem to work for me.Rinkly Rimeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-52309290674646844082009-01-31T20:41:00.000-08:002009-01-31T20:41:00.000-08:00I enjoyed reading your verses - especially thought...I enjoyed reading your verses - especially thought this was cool: <BR/><BR/>unlock the moon<BR/>before the dawn and the light comes on<BR/><BR/>Love the imagery.John E. Tranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14594659729954601082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-8339634484826773642009-01-31T19:52:00.000-08:002009-01-31T19:52:00.000-08:00regrets bear great weight--tis true, tis true.regrets bear great weight--tis true, tis true.Lilibethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04031218249072893776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-51221519315136664142009-01-31T19:13:00.000-08:002009-01-31T19:13:00.000-08:00The poems just felt like regret...a visceral respo...The poems just felt like regret...a visceral response I suppose.b+ (Retire In Style Blog)https://www.blogger.com/profile/05114209481329773753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-34901077104039453562009-01-31T18:04:00.000-08:002009-01-31T18:04:00.000-08:00unlock the moon/before the dawn and the light come...unlock the moon/before the dawn and the light comes on/half past her cry after the night has bled<BR/><BR/>sense the mourning here. lovely in its sadness.susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14924982664582970754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-47452531971869499422009-01-31T16:08:00.000-08:002009-01-31T16:08:00.000-08:00Love 'em both, in fact all three, in fact all four...Love 'em both, in fact all three, in fact all four because you have a different version on the picture to the heading.<BR/> In Faultless I love the thought that you could dress to acquire fresh and novel sins. Phew!Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-14151050914346747282009-01-31T15:42:00.000-08:002009-01-31T15:42:00.000-08:00Love the artwork and of course the lyrical, excell...Love the artwork and of course the lyrical, excellent poems! :)maryt/theteachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17516961981692076719noreply@blogger.com