tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post5282627396234169757..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: Swing for Big Tent PoetryTumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-60977876258568566612010-11-24T04:19:37.221-08:002010-11-24T04:19:37.221-08:00Love this application of "recipe".Love this application of "recipe".EKSwitajhttp://www.elizabethkateswitaj.net/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-61329684727936688712010-11-22T13:56:44.455-08:002010-11-22T13:56:44.455-08:00i really enjoyed this :)i really enjoyed this :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-3021163697837408152010-11-22T07:43:39.315-08:002010-11-22T07:43:39.315-08:00A sure shot recipe! I could see it all.. the swing...A sure shot recipe! I could see it all.. the swing, the looping..indiwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01869142617068567153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-71706411933549239402010-11-20T17:44:03.255-08:002010-11-20T17:44:03.255-08:00Ah, so much lovely motion in your word choices. Ni...Ah, so much lovely motion in your word choices. Nice alliteration as well. Beautifully done.Kellyhttp://www.starsandwillows.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-12813919947468213432010-11-20T16:10:54.342-08:002010-11-20T16:10:54.342-08:00nicely done.....thanks for sharing thisnicely done.....thanks for sharing thisWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-31818612009941857212010-11-20T15:58:03.659-08:002010-11-20T15:58:03.659-08:00A beautiful cascade. One of the first mother-child...A beautiful cascade. One of the first mother-child activity together is a swing. Depicted very well here.kaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-61299782888573798252010-11-20T13:58:08.267-08:002010-11-20T13:58:08.267-08:00I feel sorry for any child that misses out on this...I feel sorry for any child that misses out on this wonderful part of their childhood, what lovely writing.Amanda Moorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11631827449933791507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-15776013128702741212010-11-20T13:32:48.769-08:002010-11-20T13:32:48.769-08:00sweet and freeing - pleasure pumping lift - great ...sweet and freeing - pleasure pumping lift - great description of that wonderful feeling of childhood.nanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03445777687088584603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-64788369318509734322010-11-20T11:11:35.975-08:002010-11-20T11:11:35.975-08:00really enjoying the clause form... it brings out a...really enjoying the clause form... it brings out a whole new dimension to poetry... the thought of swinging on a sunny day and singing... it doesn't get any better..ms piehttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2010/11/19/imagine/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-56054963543967952842010-11-20T10:24:12.725-08:002010-11-20T10:24:12.725-08:00Oh... how beautiful. I love the entire thing. Imag...Oh... how beautiful. I love the entire thing. Images and then, at the end..."oh, the image!" <br /><br />Love how you took it on...Julie Jordan Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06558015761690505791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-19273290860894769622010-11-20T07:35:51.486-08:002010-11-20T07:35:51.486-08:00Graceful sense of rhythm and balance. Your work wi...Graceful sense of rhythm and balance. Your work with the form came out well, I think.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-56949440241478565492010-11-20T06:59:24.857-08:002010-11-20T06:59:24.857-08:00This was a hard prompt, wasn't it? But you di...This was a hard prompt, wasn't it? But you did a "swinging" job with it!Cynthia Shorthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12386358503730817278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-80344498627570883402010-11-19T22:25:20.184-08:002010-11-19T22:25:20.184-08:00Nice capture! Love the last line. :)Nice capture! Love the last line. :)faithhttp://articlesoffaithandfancy.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-50305402197419708522010-11-19T17:39:07.177-08:002010-11-19T17:39:07.177-08:00Yes. I too love the lines "she sings the key...Yes. I too love the lines "she sings the key of happy/riding the rising swing". Nice!Robinhttp://www.robin-turner.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-34849928389990728032010-11-19T16:13:05.515-08:002010-11-19T16:13:05.515-08:00Nice cascade. I especially liked the joy in the li...Nice cascade. I especially liked the joy in the line "she sings the key of happy".Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-63861159667793013202010-11-19T14:40:08.990-08:002010-11-19T14:40:08.990-08:00Love the rhythm of this 'swinging' recipe!...Love the rhythm of this 'swinging' recipe! Fits wonderfully as a cascade!Elizabeth Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00681448814813694801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-82297394696536460522010-11-19T14:17:17.175-08:002010-11-19T14:17:17.175-08:00I agree with Linda, it is like being on a swing. W...I agree with Linda, it is like being on a swing. Well-done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-41965668472715638482010-11-19T12:41:00.450-08:002010-11-19T12:41:00.450-08:00Susan,
The image of a child on a swing is
delight...Susan,<br />The image of a child on a swing is <br />delightful. Nice cascade.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-56028197355625263652010-11-19T11:35:00.581-08:002010-11-19T11:35:00.581-08:00"She sings the key of happy" is a great ..."She sings the key of happy" is a great line! The repetition is like the swing's rhythm!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09156972661541133665noreply@blogger.com