tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post5008904254267530278..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: Haiku for One Single ImpressionTumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-61420815591590788382009-04-01T21:26:00.000-07:002009-04-01T21:26:00.000-07:00I like these! The first, 'lightning' is my favour...I like these! The first, 'lightning' is my favourite. And that fractal picture is just a little freaky.bluetoquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06478749765059486712noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-69145896035347595642009-04-01T07:26:00.000-07:002009-04-01T07:26:00.000-07:00Somebody is always smoking things up, aren't they,...Somebody is always smoking things up, aren't they, Sue?<BR/>We (Central Texas) have rain now but until then we had been under burn bans and putting out forest fires. Most of them were started by carless or malicious people.<BR/>..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-799562863256561942009-03-31T22:05:00.000-07:002009-03-31T22:05:00.000-07:00No skull seen by me. But I like the rhythmness of ...No skull seen by me. <BR/><BR/>But I like the rhythmness of your haikus.abbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08879476262337290531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-47598944279638434052009-03-31T16:30:00.000-07:002009-03-31T16:30:00.000-07:00Those were genuinly good ... I mean, so many words...Those were genuinly good ... I mean, so many words hidden all over!!!<BR/><BR/>Thanks for sharing :)Tanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07613642883793373191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-65896400078554715622009-03-31T14:11:00.000-07:002009-03-31T14:11:00.000-07:00I especially like your second poem. And I too see ...I especially like your second poem. And I too see a skull - with flowing hair...Ravenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04996538460071167819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-56179805777383807452009-03-31T11:10:00.000-07:002009-03-31T11:10:00.000-07:00Oh- I see the skull- very cool. I enjoyed the poe...Oh- I see the skull- very cool. I enjoyed the poems...loved the words "false clouds" Nicely done.Pattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04993186190720192589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-82844560313748300712009-03-30T17:24:00.000-07:002009-03-30T17:24:00.000-07:00thoughtful verses, nature is often fierce and drea...thoughtful verses, nature is often fierce and dreadful yet impersonal - no animosity. I like the second verse the best, the "false clouds" of smoke.sgreerpitthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07764262558160301061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-56780193115322398632009-03-30T14:13:00.000-07:002009-03-30T14:13:00.000-07:00Must be the power of suggestion, Tumbleword, becau...Must be the power of suggestion, Tumbleword, because I see it too!<BR/><BR/>These are some beautiful gems you wrote.<BR/><BR/><B>"...red sun<BR/>...false clouds<BR/>felled by smoke"</B><BR/><BR/>I loved these lines.Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)https://www.blogger.com/profile/14722413697537828830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-47799173374670980762009-03-30T13:31:00.000-07:002009-03-30T13:31:00.000-07:00Oh I see it too; weird. You and I were thinking a...Oh I see it too; weird. You and I were thinking along the same lines I see. No pun intended. After all the snow we've had it would be ironic to suffer a smoke filled summer. I really liked these Sue. the first one gripped my heart.Quiet Pathshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00758542150832581706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-20765940124473119352009-03-30T13:25:00.000-07:002009-03-30T13:25:00.000-07:00Oh yes, Sue, I see that skull. That would be a gr...Oh yes, Sue, I see that skull. That would be a great no smoking ad.<BR/><BR/>I don't have a favorite this time. They are equally well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-1326351396164219772009-03-30T12:16:00.000-07:002009-03-30T12:16:00.000-07:00...false cloudssmoke lightningignites ancient fe......false clouds<BR/><BR/>smoke <BR/> <BR/>lightning<BR/><BR/>ignites ancient fervor/(rearranged-) <BR/><BR/><BR/>..ur essay on environment..zoya gautamhttp://horizonnext.blogspot.com/2009/03/smoke-osi.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-7861621884142159832009-03-30T11:10:00.000-07:002009-03-30T11:10:00.000-07:00I like the first poem the most! Great drawing Sue,...I like the first poem the most! Great drawing Sue, love it.<BR/><BR/>Hugs, GGeraldine https://www.blogger.com/profile/07410019941984295767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-4703842004785792782009-03-30T08:13:00.000-07:002009-03-30T08:13:00.000-07:00The power of a wild natural forest fire understand...The power of a wild natural forest fire understandably instills too much fear in us to really appreciate the power in it - the land renewing itself in tandem with the lightning, the sun turning red. Beautiful words here!Deborah Godinhttp://notesfromthecloudmessenger.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-43507839782203211852009-03-30T05:06:00.000-07:002009-03-30T05:06:00.000-07:00I see your skull and will raise you an Aboriginal ...I see your skull and will raise you an Aboriginal tribesman with the enlarged lip ring! Do you see the ring? Or is it just me.Hootin' Annihttp://hootin--anni.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-39008374175271275952009-03-30T02:28:00.000-07:002009-03-30T02:28:00.000-07:00Yeah cool, 'truthiness' is groovy!!Yeah cool, 'truthiness' is groovy!!Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-73757774505384145782009-03-30T00:21:00.000-07:002009-03-30T00:21:00.000-07:00You always describe nature excellently.You always describe nature excellently.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-84299348188649462722009-03-29T23:13:00.000-07:002009-03-29T23:13:00.000-07:00I see a lot in these lines....mystic and unconvent...I see a lot in these lines....mystic and unconventional.Simply loved it!!!!<BR/><BR/>Pls do drop by my blog as well...there's a new poem and I love ur coments.deepteshpoetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085957808600583994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-27533111939749599312009-03-29T21:07:00.000-07:002009-03-29T21:07:00.000-07:00Me too sees the skull :)The second one is my favou...Me too sees the skull :)The second one is my favourite.Jeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-50393297502859146222009-03-29T20:48:00.000-07:002009-03-29T20:48:00.000-07:00oooh i definitely see the skull! i really like the...oooh i definitely see the skull! i really like the first haiku.. very true that the sky is a fiery red when there's smoke in the air. very appropriate.floretahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18220834824793299258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-46616580428388410942009-03-29T20:41:00.000-07:002009-03-29T20:41:00.000-07:00There IS a skull in there! Loved these--especially...There IS a skull in there! <BR/><BR/>Loved these--especially the last one! And the skull...<BR/><BR/>Thanks--Beth P.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02621990661878989356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-12244160143309576252009-03-29T18:50:00.000-07:002009-03-29T18:50:00.000-07:00I see the skull. I thought, "No way," at first, an...I see the skull. I thought, "No way," at first, and then I thought, yup, a skull. <BR/><BR/>I enjoyed these very much. We are experiencing an electrical storm right now, so the first one was exciting.<BR/><BR/>I hope the spring does not retreat.SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.com