tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post4885237185296054549..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: StrangerTumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-14945707707945377242007-10-24T13:09:00.000-07:002007-10-24T13:09:00.000-07:00Hmm...so good. I love the last three lines. And ...Hmm...so good. I love the last three lines. And the picture is so intriguing. Fantastic!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-20161671571057251522007-10-24T12:36:00.000-07:002007-10-24T12:36:00.000-07:00your writing is so lovely...your writing is so lovely...little wing writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16010376737431344381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-43222282058762220242007-10-24T12:15:00.000-07:002007-10-24T12:15:00.000-07:00now THIS is poetry! great post. :)now THIS is poetry! great post. :)Lucyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11442070518518821892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-4085792307590800312007-10-24T05:44:00.000-07:002007-10-24T05:44:00.000-07:00Wonderful, intense imagery in this poem. Brilliant...Wonderful, intense imagery in this poem. Brilliant! JP/debJP (mom)https://www.blogger.com/profile/03120439923927414464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-55914282471283227212007-10-24T04:52:00.000-07:002007-10-24T04:52:00.000-07:00Very cool -- and deep, indeed. I'm pretty fascinat...Very cool -- and deep, indeed. I'm pretty fascinated by this.<BR/><BR/>Thanks for stopping by; I hope you'll come back more often!Susan Helene Gottfriedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-1035405929568372652007-10-24T03:39:00.000-07:002007-10-24T03:39:00.000-07:00"tones of iritants"love the depths of this phrase!..."tones of iritants"<BR/><BR/>love the depths of this phrase!Gerald (Ackworth born)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10972748175799683560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-23183908457531318892007-10-24T01:48:00.000-07:002007-10-24T01:48:00.000-07:00An excellent poem, packed full of such strong imag...An excellent poem, packed full of such strong images. The way she conjures lovers reminds me of Helen Reddy's "Angie Baby".Robinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02409530202277375625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-87491622884637279312007-10-24T01:10:00.000-07:002007-10-24T01:10:00.000-07:00a short poem bursting with imagery ... lovely and ...a short poem bursting with imagery ... lovely and powerful at the same timeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-54571237536494488342007-10-23T23:33:00.000-07:002007-10-23T23:33:00.000-07:00Sooo short, so poignant, so sad, Thank You!Sooo short, so poignant, so sad, Thank You!Cheriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04139558255321645746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-14084023424673153452007-10-23T23:24:00.000-07:002007-10-23T23:24:00.000-07:00Form & content work well here. Concentrating conte...Form & content work well here. Concentrating content within a short poem is always a challenge.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-87099185411936034082007-10-23T22:51:00.000-07:002007-10-23T22:51:00.000-07:00Mmmmm.... as usual, lovely work. I am quite in aw...Mmmmm.... as usual, lovely work. I am quite in awe of what you do with words. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-53924744401428172832007-10-23T21:38:00.000-07:002007-10-23T21:38:00.000-07:00It seems (to me) you've been creating some sparse ...It seems (to me) you've been creating some sparse poems with amazing depth. (Or is this my imagination?) I like the times of day--the different light--and sensual details.Debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14744896385434246402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-20464937195552405782007-10-23T21:00:00.000-07:002007-10-23T21:00:00.000-07:00She should listen to her mother, who, I am sure, t...She should listen to her mother, who, I am sure, taught her never to talk to strangers....<BR/><BR/>Fun post, and I love your fractals!Joyce Ellen Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13494251587598676788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-39078292383086864232007-10-23T20:12:00.000-07:002007-10-23T20:12:00.000-07:00i love the visual this bringsi love the visual this bringsAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-72767245972650059252007-10-23T18:53:00.000-07:002007-10-23T18:53:00.000-07:00The last line is very brave and honest and real..I...The last line is very brave and honest and real..<BR/><BR/>I love strong women writing without the "expected" sentiment.wendyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14586814769281622578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-1745759218361034192007-10-23T17:12:00.000-07:002007-10-23T17:12:00.000-07:00Tumblewords,How straight forward your poem shows t...Tumblewords,<BR/>How straight forward your poem shows two sides to the coin of imagination!<BR/>relrelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09030572981830789370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-86852900314777939692007-10-23T16:37:00.000-07:002007-10-23T16:37:00.000-07:00the flow of words and the imagery are amazing. gre...the flow of words and the imagery are amazing. great poem!Greggohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14513431229566322384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-64199743474846215692007-10-23T16:30:00.000-07:002007-10-23T16:30:00.000-07:00To say so much with so few words is tallent indeed...To say so much with so few words is tallent indeed. Loved it.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-91562734488185731612007-10-23T16:07:00.000-07:002007-10-23T16:07:00.000-07:00I loved the poem and the fractel 'potrait!' Both ...I loved the poem and the fractel 'potrait!' Both were astoningingly good! At least to me.Mary Timmehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06610970753020969331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-70992158722968446632007-10-23T15:28:00.000-07:002007-10-23T15:28:00.000-07:00This is wonderful and powerful! I love the intensi...This is wonderful and powerful! I love the intensity of it from words like "hard, dropped, harsh, barked, tones, irritants, buzzed, and warning". And the last line was fantastic how it starts out soft and gentle and turns into something harsher like a stranger. Your fractal totally blew me away -- what an incredible face -- otherworldly and so expressive! It's really beautiful.<BR/>:)Clarehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11746014771712020963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-20817270619222133962007-10-23T14:05:00.000-07:002007-10-23T14:05:00.000-07:00Beautiful words about a harsh reality about lovele...Beautiful words about a harsh reality about loveless encountersMarjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17458942200244031009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-59483390895495490762007-10-23T13:55:00.000-07:002007-10-23T13:55:00.000-07:00Very dreamlike imagery. I love it! I hope her gl...Very dreamlike imagery. I love it! I hope her glowing morning wishes and a less cold reality find a way to intersect.Beau Brackishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08472788833737826733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-69150102636164138042007-10-23T12:54:00.000-07:002007-10-23T12:54:00.000-07:00Lovely images in your poem! So sad the life she le...Lovely images in your poem! So sad the life she leads - perhaps she's looking for the one to save her?paris parfaithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05457437124988976587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-81391440883425323722007-10-23T12:28:00.000-07:002007-10-23T12:28:00.000-07:00i've been away from the island for a bit and i've ...i've been away from the island for a bit and i've missed your poems. glad they're still lovely as always :)Lucy R. E.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06302642694234733536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-18960224593110578412007-10-23T11:00:00.000-07:002007-10-23T11:00:00.000-07:00a wonderful write....such lovely images.a wonderful write....such lovely images.Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15149139820474072721noreply@blogger.com