tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post4157365612536501084..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: Kabuki for Magpie Tales #122Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-77236096041744068232012-06-24T05:40:31.306-07:002012-06-24T05:40:31.306-07:00Ooh, there are a couple of images in this I just l...Ooh, there are a couple of images in this I just love -- the tinker toys, for one -- and particularly liked the last stanza. Nice.susan m hinckleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10073318305866251569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-75117384488535923372012-06-23T13:40:01.990-07:002012-06-23T13:40:01.990-07:00I particularly like 'denim tinted sky'.Wha...I particularly like 'denim tinted sky'.What a wonderful description.The Blog of Beehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00650938872732748697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-49995236489645412802012-06-23T09:55:28.323-07:002012-06-23T09:55:28.323-07:00Wonderful...love the tinkertoys and nacred moon, a...Wonderful...love the tinkertoys and nacred moon, and the reference to Escher. Perfect.<br />Congratulations on your novel, too!dshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616750784052488695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-34408009506851529952012-06-21T04:57:02.970-07:002012-06-21T04:57:02.970-07:00The first two stanzas are great, the third is just...The first two stanzas are great, the third is just straight-ace brilliant.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-7577994408385125202012-06-19T11:52:56.295-07:002012-06-19T11:52:56.295-07:00Simply Beautiful!!!Simply Beautiful!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-57703699805797389112012-06-18T20:58:58.789-07:002012-06-18T20:58:58.789-07:00I love the title... the photo does have a japanese...I love the title... the photo does have a japanese flavor to it.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-55669755369018953052012-06-18T09:26:26.395-07:002012-06-18T09:26:26.395-07:00When I look up at the moon tonight, I will think o...When I look up at the moon tonight, I will think of the glow as 'mother of pearl-like' ... lovely poem, lovely form.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-46002888242031520452012-06-18T05:01:43.329-07:002012-06-18T05:01:43.329-07:00Indeed, you've shown us what Escher can do...I...Indeed, you've shown us what Escher can do...I kept looking at the image while reading the poem...excellent!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-7250528283227651792012-06-18T04:32:39.925-07:002012-06-18T04:32:39.925-07:00'Nacred moon' - lovely!'Nacred moon' - lovely!Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-82491056509420799432012-06-17T23:43:48.188-07:002012-06-17T23:43:48.188-07:00Wonderful! I especially liked this: "The cha...Wonderful! I especially liked this: "The chamber of tomorrow<br />waits on a groove of air"<br /><a href="http://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/" rel="nofollow">Madeleine Begun Kane</a>Madeleine Begun Kanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12290268300271622956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-88031927540526372052012-06-17T20:26:02.362-07:002012-06-17T20:26:02.362-07:00I love the play of the illusions in your poem, und...I love the play of the illusions in your poem, under the moon and the stars. Your images dance so beautifully. Thank you for sharing this illusive write, Tumblewords and congratulations on your novel!! =DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03241402645242821612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-37740226766406028222012-06-17T17:37:59.200-07:002012-06-17T17:37:59.200-07:00you've been blessed with the gift of words. th...you've been blessed with the gift of words. this is another great poem. congrats on your novel. i'm sure it's a great read as well. have a great night~Naquillityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04784964201596357136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-43490654108013360642012-06-17T17:12:45.402-07:002012-06-17T17:12:45.402-07:00Yes, congratulations on your novel!
Your prose is ...Yes, congratulations on your novel!<br />Your prose is beautiful. <br />I love the denim-coloured sky.<br />So much about this to like!Daydreamerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04139175719967937843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-45479503318172476622012-06-17T17:11:06.707-07:002012-06-17T17:11:06.707-07:00I like the tinker toy idea! good one-I like the tinker toy idea! good one-izzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06379007428464069723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-62005552213912702392012-06-17T14:41:59.774-07:002012-06-17T14:41:59.774-07:00I especially like "where stairs like Escher&#...I especially like "where stairs like Escher's carry all that disappears"...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-5274058053948194512012-06-17T14:39:44.430-07:002012-06-17T14:39:44.430-07:00Oh yes, this is a strong write. I like the allusi...Oh yes, this is a strong write. I like the allusion to escher, as well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-10710295235042804532012-06-17T13:50:20.111-07:002012-06-17T13:50:20.111-07:00nice allusion to eschers other work there in the e...nice allusion to eschers other work there in the end...that middle stanza is so cool...and i like the tinkertoys ref too...they do look like that..Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-5706182230685472172012-06-17T13:35:09.412-07:002012-06-17T13:35:09.412-07:00Such beautiful words, images... and congratulation...Such beautiful words, images... and congratulations on your novel!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.com