tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post3721041594695864733..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: Sonnet RocksTumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-84164959675811907572008-02-08T13:47:00.000-08:002008-02-08T13:47:00.000-08:00I thought the whole damn thing was GREAT!!---- Sin...I thought the whole damn thing was GREAT!!---- Since it was me there stuck beneath that hat/in the sun and the sweat love a day like that/<BR/>When the sun escapes from it's winter den/ Ill be out under that old hat again/ in a labor of love with my chipmonk friends/ Lord give me the rocks and the sunshine so sweet/ and if you would sir---and aged whiskey neat. Love Yer Bro!!billzonbloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03590522701425721236noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-7294630957606132912008-01-30T10:46:00.000-08:002008-01-30T10:46:00.000-08:00That last couplet is excellent!That last couplet is excellent!Allysonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02498689672857820197noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-15953096353306260632008-01-28T05:48:00.000-08:002008-01-28T05:48:00.000-08:00Love how you've captured this memory with such sim...Love how you've captured this memory with such simplicity! I knew it was your brother before you told us...and I'm not sure why! Excellent visuals! Wonderful tribute!!<BR/><BR/>Hugs SherrieGiggleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11713143985984314202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-40957627591380087532008-01-26T17:36:00.000-08:002008-01-26T17:36:00.000-08:00This was wonderful, I hope this is a photo of his ...This was wonderful, I hope this is a photo of his stone work. I too love the ending lines..and the winking at noon line.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-70071094131566920272008-01-26T12:34:00.000-08:002008-01-26T12:34:00.000-08:00Beautiful! i loved the why you used your words, th...Beautiful! i loved the why you used your words, they made a great image in my minedYours truly Masonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03090638684052626414noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-32813030186879860642008-01-25T23:06:00.000-08:002008-01-25T23:06:00.000-08:00Beautifully told story. All it needs now is music...Beautifully told story. All it needs now is music.Annie Jeffrieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15415548089882625246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-22423938274579834462008-01-25T15:25:00.000-08:002008-01-25T15:25:00.000-08:00Especially liked how you brought this to a close. ...Especially liked how you brought this to a close. Those last two lines made me smile.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-3708803268759376062008-01-25T13:27:00.000-08:002008-01-25T13:27:00.000-08:00Wonderfully full of life and nature and spirit! I...Wonderfully full of life and nature and spirit! I love this sonnet!<BR/>:)Clarehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11746014771712020963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-67521073947755120302008-01-25T11:02:00.000-08:002008-01-25T11:02:00.000-08:00I read this outloud.I loved the way the words "tum...I read this outloud.<BR/>I loved the way the words "tumbled" off my tongue.<BR/>I saw the flagstone patio.<BR/>SherryQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02473455565144414399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-31790974632318892592008-01-25T10:54:00.000-08:002008-01-25T10:54:00.000-08:00Definitely a good first effort! The color details ...Definitely a good first effort! The color details and the laugh lines really help bring the scene to life.Tiel Aisha Ansarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03994169558252043919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-81168335525378653232008-01-24T16:30:00.000-08:002008-01-24T16:30:00.000-08:00I could see everything that was happening. And I ...I could see everything that was happening. And I kept thinking that he certtainly needed a drink. Glad he got it!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-5696472041923456212008-01-24T12:17:00.000-08:002008-01-24T12:17:00.000-08:00I loved it! Vivid lines that jumped right off the ...I loved it! Vivid lines that jumped right off the page - I felt like I was there.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-72335524951400090362008-01-24T11:47:00.000-08:002008-01-24T11:47:00.000-08:00Enjoyed your closing.Join me at BES. I'm stirring ...Enjoyed your closing.<BR/><BR/>Join me at BES. I'm stirring the pot. See:<BR/><BR/>Okay, it’s been a few days, but Jilly at Poetry Hut asked about the lack of exposure for women poets. Personally, I think the bigger question is: Are we, women supporting each other? Who are reading? Whose collections do we buy and are we going to readings featuring women?<BR/><BR/>http://blackeyedsusans.blogspot.com/2008/01/supporting-women-poets.htmlsusanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14924982664582970754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-28004161334804735792008-01-24T07:45:00.000-08:002008-01-24T07:45:00.000-08:00Really has a nice rhythm that reflects the task......Really has a nice rhythm that reflects the task...Paul D.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00535027161567978343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-50556980006288241702008-01-24T04:42:00.000-08:002008-01-24T04:42:00.000-08:00this is wonderful,, a definite deviation from your...this is wonderful,, a definite deviation from your regular style...<BR/>i like the simplicity of it,, i went way out of my comfort zone on this one...paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-38627391767616012842008-01-24T04:20:00.000-08:002008-01-24T04:20:00.000-08:00lovely piece of writing'he'll sing to his world' r...lovely piece of writing<BR/><BR/>'he'll sing to his world' really stood out for meChristine Gailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14605702499635622573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-51399073159093973232008-01-24T01:56:00.000-08:002008-01-24T01:56:00.000-08:00great for a first sonnet! love in a sonnetgreat for a first sonnet! <BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2008/01/love-in-sonnet-totally-optional-prompts.html" REL="nofollow">love in a sonnet</A>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-59972032501566656762008-01-24T01:03:00.000-08:002008-01-24T01:03:00.000-08:00I like the way you use the word rock - from the ti...I like the way you use the word rock - from the title to the hard rock seat... and the pic of the dry stone wall.Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-81469609048308260242008-01-23T22:20:00.000-08:002008-01-23T22:20:00.000-08:00those last two lines are excellent!"With a strum o...those last two lines are excellent!<BR/><BR/>"With a strum of strings and one whiskey neat<BR/>He'll sing to his world from a hard rock seat."sister AEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17253107622268200803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-44480014061367352062008-01-23T21:23:00.000-08:002008-01-23T21:23:00.000-08:00Worth more than a 1000 snapshots.Worth more than a 1000 snapshots.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com