tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post2976597693784127670..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: WraparoundTumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-22138551863148590042009-03-26T06:55:00.000-07:002009-03-26T06:55:00.000-07:00the first one is very powerful. loved the hidden m...the first one is very powerful. loved the hidden meaning of ittotomaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01805083472267649276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-59925842458637225432009-03-25T10:00:00.000-07:002009-03-25T10:00:00.000-07:00Your first one is my favorite. I fear we are all g...Your first one is my favorite. I fear we are all guilty of that, most days.Julia Phillips Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-89157693056760323182009-03-23T15:06:00.000-07:002009-03-23T15:06:00.000-07:00First of all, love the poem, its got a great feel ...First of all, love the poem, its got a great feel to it and then it complements the fractal so well too.<BR/><BR/>"If you blink your eyes fast you can make the buildings jiggle...."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-33652054365116411022009-03-23T13:41:00.000-07:002009-03-23T13:41:00.000-07:00Rich words, powerfully put together. Wonderful, as...Rich words, powerfully put together. Wonderful, as always!Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-82357841352473244242009-03-23T13:27:00.000-07:002009-03-23T13:27:00.000-07:00I'm not sure what this poem means but I love the w...I'm not sure what this poem means but I love the way it sounds. All the Fs in the middle stanza really stand out...like they are supposed to, I guess, when phallic is involved!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-3375194726898565762009-03-23T11:28:00.000-07:002009-03-23T11:28:00.000-07:00Some great words in these.Some great words in these.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-56946300881008834312009-03-23T11:26:00.000-07:002009-03-23T11:26:00.000-07:00linda's right, it does pack a punch. was it inspir...linda's right, it does pack a punch. was it inspired by the fractal?<BR/><BR/>I like the sounds of the last stanza, I actually connected it like this:<BR/><BR/>chastise the jaded<BR/>flail... <BR/><BR/>love that.<BR/><BR/>BTW - in Firefox browser this page looks odd. Some of the text is off and the left side almost runs off the screen.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-7538210452265287812007-12-29T22:24:00.000-08:002007-12-29T22:24:00.000-08:00Intriguing...Intriguing...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-22959062531540857282007-12-29T08:10:00.000-08:002007-12-29T08:10:00.000-08:00Great phrases in there..I can't pick!Great phrases in there..I can't pick!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-31838452373077142812007-12-28T23:11:00.000-08:002007-12-28T23:11:00.000-08:00fingering the faded sky, what a gorgeous image, ve...fingering the faded sky, what a gorgeous image, very well done.Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15149139820474072721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-45683534050470689292007-12-28T12:49:00.000-08:002007-12-28T12:49:00.000-08:00Love those phallic rooflines! I'm always amazed b...Love those phallic rooflines! I'm always amazed by your word choices. You pack plenty in a little package!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.com