tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post1860428960892530834..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: Shame for Sunday ScribblingsTumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-74857940013025989642009-10-30T00:05:32.438-07:002009-10-30T00:05:32.438-07:00absolutely ALIVE!
Shame on meabsolutely ALIVE!<br /><br /><a href="http://2short2sweet.blogspot.com/2009/10/shame-on-me-i-fool-me.html" rel="nofollow">Shame on me</a>Americanising Desihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04089753612782157378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-73535506006193092772009-10-27T22:02:10.859-07:002009-10-27T22:02:10.859-07:00Vivid metaphor
I can imagine those "rude and ...Vivid metaphor<br />I can imagine those "rude and rowdy ravens" "growling"- your images for shame are powerful. Excellent poem!Gelhttp://soulcrayons.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-70647738270556956952009-10-26T17:43:10.545-07:002009-10-26T17:43:10.545-07:00I love the alliterations every time you mention th...I love the alliterations every time you mention the ravens. It sounds just like their caws.ChefDruckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01581859830585809291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-9936663470868461012009-10-25T20:24:47.867-07:002009-10-25T20:24:47.867-07:00I love it when make us each bring out own meaning ...I love it when make us each bring out own meaning to the poem. What did she do that would have "ravens growl guilt at the light of day"? Beautiful.<br /><br />bbhttp://torristravels.blogpsot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-20613987239867306152009-10-25T19:58:37.083-07:002009-10-25T19:58:37.083-07:00Loved the third stanza. Shame being a form of dea...Loved the third stanza. Shame being a form of death? Interesting picture.Dee Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-3235051737738215572009-10-25T13:22:57.455-07:002009-10-25T13:22:57.455-07:00Wonderful metaphor and imagery here! Bravo :)
JP...Wonderful metaphor and imagery here! Bravo :)<br /><br />JP/debJP/debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16588554280207421724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-53307890283225150342009-10-25T12:04:36.276-07:002009-10-25T12:04:36.276-07:00I feel pecked at mercilessly. Nicely done.I feel pecked at mercilessly. Nicely done.Patois42https://www.blogger.com/profile/07764936858778730692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-25445139707405924052009-10-25T09:05:38.654-07:002009-10-25T09:05:38.654-07:00Nice work..but you always write well. this poem i...Nice work..but you always write well. this poem is special for me. takes my heart to sweet memories. maybe it wasn't meant to be that way but good poetry takes different people to different placesGeorge S Battyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15407137341843413701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-8083716815775971172009-10-25T07:20:55.976-07:002009-10-25T07:20:55.976-07:00Like how you use the symbolism of the ravens to im...Like how you use the symbolism of the ravens to impress the shame; and how the "r" sound goes through the poem in so many words.Gordon Masonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11405099521661854141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-83870440129325049712009-10-24T21:56:54.010-07:002009-10-24T21:56:54.010-07:00lovely one. these lines are brilliant
when nights...lovely one. these lines are brilliant<br /><br />when nights turn long and<br />love goes absentJeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-78715895384270083542009-10-24T20:49:27.332-07:002009-10-24T20:49:27.332-07:00Very well written...interesting !Very well written...interesting !Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-20150097447222331272009-10-24T20:15:19.238-07:002009-10-24T20:15:19.238-07:00Ooh, I really like this!! I like how you convey ho...Ooh, I really like this!! I like how you convey how shame can remove pieces of us slowly over time until we are no more.Heliotropismhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17329255406657406995noreply@blogger.com