tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post1740012211648444455..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: Poem for RWP #113Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-24801710071408424872010-02-17T02:01:37.514-08:002010-02-17T02:01:37.514-08:00Delicious use of red.Delicious use of red.Irenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12918979903066830662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-79579577004938409522010-02-14T15:58:31.266-08:002010-02-14T15:58:31.266-08:00The imagery is beautiful and succulent! I love it!...The imagery is beautiful and succulent! I love it!<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-87015404683468792962010-02-14T09:16:13.204-08:002010-02-14T09:16:13.204-08:00Hey Tumblewords,
Long time away for me, and look ...Hey Tumblewords,<br /><br />Long time away for me, and look what I find on my venture back to the eworld. <br /><br />Crimson magic.<br /><br />Red ink, and corrective... ...as in, attitude adjusting.<br /><br />This is a fabulous poem.<br /><br />"a tasty mound of crimson"? Lovely, but not extraordinary.<br /><br />But, followed up with "wrapping old seeds" and we are entering somewhere special, and my admission is costing me only time, which I always gladly spend visiting your, spinning, polishing, tumbling word smithing poetry blog. With pretty fractals thrown in, too, sometimes.<br /><br />Now, Tumblewords, I have to admit that I stumble a bit at the "waters my mouth", even with the "as if in practice..." that follows. It seems forced.<br /><br />But, hey, then I hit "removing all colour from my world (sorry, I look back, and up, and realize that I cannot help but use Canadian spellings) until"<br /><br />and then<br /><br />"all I find is a single spot of scarlet as the outer white"<br /><br />And my socks are knocked off, flying into the next county. The next province, even. Which is reasonable as China borders me, these days.<br /><br />And, Tumblewords, this is wonderful. Wonderful stuff.<br /><br />Thank you for stepping out of your comfort zone. I love the new, too. (And I also love the poetry that you are more usually comfortable with.)Sepiru Chrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08600130405222535830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-66383603580953576022010-02-14T04:22:37.190-08:002010-02-14T04:22:37.190-08:00A beautiful poem. Happy Valentine's Day!A beautiful poem. Happy Valentine's Day!Elaine Yimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07473617720902049498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-58921661535289975892010-02-13T16:57:34.381-08:002010-02-13T16:57:34.381-08:00I like where this went....nicely doneI like where this went....nicely doneWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-21121134613613490952010-02-13T09:39:44.596-08:002010-02-13T09:39:44.596-08:00Love the use of colors.Love the use of colors.EKSwitajhttp://www.elizabethkateswitaj.net/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-198358075734437982010-02-12T22:36:49.972-08:002010-02-12T22:36:49.972-08:00Very nice poeme !Very nice poeme !Gattinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06636525277807715146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-23786116425310738862010-02-12T20:44:05.546-08:002010-02-12T20:44:05.546-08:00Great images. "winter rides roughshot"-...Great images. "winter rides roughshot"--that is too true!spiritsoflenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09663418154339084941noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-80725220324027220462010-02-12T17:30:55.693-08:002010-02-12T17:30:55.693-08:00I am afriad I just can't write poems. I LOl at...I am afriad I just can't write poems. I LOl at myself when i had to teach my students.<br /><br />I told them, just write what you feel like, throw the rules out of the window, What a radical teacher!!!Ann, Chen Jie Xue 陈洁雪https://www.blogger.com/profile/04399207312968010460noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-84574362063826533382010-02-12T15:54:17.807-08:002010-02-12T15:54:17.807-08:00"a harvest garden while winter rides roughsho..."a harvest garden while winter rides roughshod removing all color from my world until all I find is a single spot of scarlet "<br /><br />Great lines. I really like the way you referenced color throughout this one.Zouxzouxhttp://www.zouxzoux.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-10241904059651983052010-02-12T14:14:29.803-08:002010-02-12T14:14:29.803-08:00That was a truly mouth watering read -- and I alwa...That was a truly mouth watering read -- and I always enjoy your digital art...rob kistnerhttp://image-verse.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-65194799456438156032010-02-12T10:53:17.080-08:002010-02-12T10:53:17.080-08:00I love "in that world where cold has died.&qu...I love "in that world where cold has died."<br /><br />This reminds me why I love English muffins with jam.Jameshttp://coyotemercury.com/blog1noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-58256070538708971822010-02-12T06:56:31.151-08:002010-02-12T06:56:31.151-08:00Wow!
Great imagery...and I just finished a Bluebe...Wow!<br /><br />Great imagery...and I just finished a Blueberry Scone and wished I had an English Muffin instead...<br /><br />I like your extended verse.markhttp://radio-nowhere.org/nb/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-75610051919355119072010-02-11T16:58:30.884-08:002010-02-11T16:58:30.884-08:00This is very beautiful in its imagery as always an...This is very beautiful in its imagery as always and I do like your extended verse.Works very well!rallentandanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-70132694918019599542010-02-11T16:05:46.745-08:002010-02-11T16:05:46.745-08:00Love the honeycombed face...Love the honeycombed face...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-37514090034378517252010-02-11T15:20:29.613-08:002010-02-11T15:20:29.613-08:00The sound of it just rolls right out of the mouth ...The sound of it just rolls right out of the mouth when read aloud... wonderful description of the image and the metaphors that spring from it. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-9908497750160427812010-02-11T14:27:17.539-08:002010-02-11T14:27:17.539-08:00Very lovely...the beginning made me hungry!Very lovely...the beginning made me hungry!Cynthia Shorthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12386358503730817278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-15861179392288039422010-02-11T13:38:14.544-08:002010-02-11T13:38:14.544-08:00Thanks for visiting my blog. You are very knowled...Thanks for visiting my blog. You are very knowledgeable in creating this as well as several other blogs. I will be following you. Wonderful poetry.Loretta Markellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04411123116369869175noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-3133538523899424962010-02-11T12:13:29.346-08:002010-02-11T12:13:29.346-08:00Yummy!
I love the way you use the image to signal...Yummy!<br /><br />I love the way you use the image to signal hope that winter's barrenness is not eternal.Paul Oakleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17426789386840488470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-85720760837475830632010-02-11T11:52:45.966-08:002010-02-11T11:52:45.966-08:00Loved it,took a great turn! Plus I now want an eng...Loved it,took a great turn! Plus I now want an english muffin!! lol<br /><br />Hugs GigglesGiggleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11713143985984314202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-16706330879359300862010-02-11T10:34:13.494-08:002010-02-11T10:34:13.494-08:00This goes from the simple to the very deep. Excell...This goes from the simple to the very deep. Excellent.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-14759634824517114542010-02-11T10:30:58.983-08:002010-02-11T10:30:58.983-08:00Your jam is a bit like the rwp splat. I like the ...Your jam is a bit like the rwp splat. I like the "tasty mound...waters my mouth..practice for a harvest garden" sequence. The thought of summer in the midst of what seems like far too much winter this year.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com