tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post1344269131819049917..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: Empty for OSITumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-72155331461529313982010-09-04T13:47:34.422-07:002010-09-04T13:47:34.422-07:00Hi Sue, thank goodness for windows. Huh! We have...Hi Sue, thank goodness for windows. Huh! We have a family letter back at Pilgrims's times. They used oiled paper for window coverings.<br /><br />This reads good. I lie your photo too. Just abstract enough to find all sorts of things in or out.<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-72489151082229784072010-09-01T14:03:17.138-07:002010-09-01T14:03:17.138-07:00Oh this is so perfect Sue! Loved the words and the...Oh this is so perfect Sue! Loved the words and the drawing too. Nice!!!<br /><br />www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.com<br /><br />www.veggiesyarnsandtails.wordpress.comGeraldine https://www.blogger.com/profile/07410019941984295767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-49760686344770124552010-09-01T11:45:31.053-07:002010-09-01T11:45:31.053-07:00Lovely words! I love the shadows when you suddenl...Lovely words! I love the shadows when you suddenly realize that it's quiet, and empty. That lovely haiku reminded me of that, down to the dust dancing in the air. :)<br /><br /><a rel="nofollow">• Empty</a>Bobbie Sandlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655747675222419355noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-22719354492813953022010-08-31T17:23:31.195-07:002010-08-31T17:23:31.195-07:00indoor air definitely has a lot to tell when its v...indoor air definitely has a lot to tell when its void of sounds....few words but could read into a lot.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-51738844923204074112010-08-31T10:52:07.928-07:002010-08-31T10:52:07.928-07:00when the room is quiet, shadows get to dance - not...when the room is quiet, shadows get to dance - not necessarily a sad or lonely time, depending on the occupant's point of view<br /><br />I like that the wording leaves it up to the reader to interpret<br /><br />great imageAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-88369906340698936182010-08-31T09:04:50.248-07:002010-08-31T09:04:50.248-07:00love to watch those shadows dance but i love the d...love to watch those shadows dance but i love the door being open to let fresh air inside more. the mornings have been so cool here i haven't been able to resist. <br /><br />i've had moments of my own where i want to get revenge against whatever cut me. those tiny cuts seem to hurt more too.<br /><br />ravens flapping away like that can sometimes scar one unexpectedly. great writing on each of these poems. hope all is well. have a great day.Naquillityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04784964201596357136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-67451742017598744722010-08-31T08:31:56.443-07:002010-08-31T08:31:56.443-07:00Beautiful Haiku...
The emptiness clearly shows and...Beautiful Haiku...<br />The emptiness clearly shows and speaks volumes about loneliness.Nankahttp://www.nankablogs.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-53663633409649050492010-08-31T08:30:38.392-07:002010-08-31T08:30:38.392-07:00Lovely Haiku but there is a sense of loneliness......Lovely Haiku but there is a sense of loneliness...yet...apt for the prompt...Rumyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17548105346820601110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-64246897309863219012010-08-31T08:02:00.828-07:002010-08-31T08:02:00.828-07:00Wonderful imagery! Excellent post! =)
-WeaselWonderful imagery! Excellent post! =)<br /><br />-WeaselWeaselhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12467584502095433332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-77387048208956967752010-08-31T01:39:08.685-07:002010-08-31T01:39:08.685-07:00Spare language & style reinforce the concept. ...Spare language & style reinforce the concept. Beautiful visual, too. Well done.Ron.http://rlavalette.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-13118106957061713582010-08-31T00:44:34.203-07:002010-08-31T00:44:34.203-07:00There's a scariness to this. Love it.There's a scariness to this. Love it.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-77211929410004230672010-08-30T18:18:28.081-07:002010-08-30T18:18:28.081-07:00I love it when that happens!I love it when that happens!Tammie Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09018402134070834516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-43658846711622685832010-08-30T18:11:56.350-07:002010-08-30T18:11:56.350-07:00What happens inside--and why the end of summer can...What happens inside--and why the end of summer can be a challenge.SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-47780670452220599572010-08-30T18:11:39.189-07:002010-08-30T18:11:39.189-07:00Love the dancing shadowsLove the dancing shadowsCarinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12976869000808518440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-40187509963138236862010-08-30T18:09:46.072-07:002010-08-30T18:09:46.072-07:00so sweet and clever...love it!so sweet and clever...love it!Sandra.ifhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07861930312460679629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-77644475875963412022010-08-30T18:05:12.894-07:002010-08-30T18:05:12.894-07:00Love the isolation in this one.Love the isolation in this one.mareymercyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03407666873261385487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-58925852412079103742010-08-30T17:14:44.929-07:002010-08-30T17:14:44.929-07:00That last line, those two words, they work so well...That last line, those two words, they work so well. The synergy and vivid power of your haiku is quite wonderful.Sam Liuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01014838954712295981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-37488816513008286202010-08-30T15:23:35.914-07:002010-08-30T15:23:35.914-07:00I get a strong sense of absence and enclosure from...I get a strong sense of absence and enclosure from these lines.EKSwitajhttp://www.elizabethkateswitaj.net/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-46713754311509469042010-08-30T13:56:39.189-07:002010-08-30T13:56:39.189-07:00Have you noticed that poets see the world differen...Have you noticed that poets see the world differently?<br />I love your view.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com