tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post1325917169467176243..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: Balance HaikuTumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-55850703791730980802007-10-19T13:09:00.000-07:002007-10-19T13:09:00.000-07:00I love how you so ably balanced the opposites. The...I love how you so ably balanced the opposites. The magpie is a delight. (The poem as well as the bird!)Patois42https://www.blogger.com/profile/07764936858778730692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-77809605633356671942007-10-16T22:10:00.000-07:002007-10-16T22:10:00.000-07:00love that sentence - listen to the sky. That is so...love that sentence - listen to the sky. That is so evocative of night here and all you can hear are the night birds and their calls.Everydaythingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02562558164959015562noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-84281180013444271232007-10-16T18:56:00.000-07:002007-10-16T18:56:00.000-07:00Loved the ending. There's a deep message there. A ...Loved the ending. There's a deep message there. A great week for you!Gilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14764043301335852527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-74353088813445700552007-10-16T18:43:00.000-07:002007-10-16T18:43:00.000-07:00Impressive writing you have! I especially liked th...Impressive writing you have! I especially liked the last one. Congratulations on the watercolor as well. I love the blend of color. What do you paint it on?Gilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14764043301335852527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-24257657547107301632007-10-16T13:15:00.000-07:002007-10-16T13:15:00.000-07:00these are all great, but the last one took my brea...these are all great, but the last one took my breath away. 'absence reigns' is brilliant!Greggohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14513431229566322384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-65720111863295393512007-10-16T13:09:00.000-07:002007-10-16T13:09:00.000-07:00Such strong images, I love them, and also the wate...Such strong images, I love them, and also the watercolor.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-19652505013470028712007-10-16T13:03:00.000-07:002007-10-16T13:03:00.000-07:00And I really like the second one. Where oh where ...And I really like the second one. Where oh where is your entry for Writer's Island this week? I missed it! Sigh.Mary Timmehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06610970753020969331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-14195482351305174952007-10-16T08:02:00.000-07:002007-10-16T08:02:00.000-07:00Oh my I do love that first one... the magpie image...Oh my I do love that first one... the magpie image is so strong. Thank you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-49099703751357149332007-10-16T07:25:00.000-07:002007-10-16T07:25:00.000-07:00I love the last two especially. Magpies are hard ...I love the last two especially. Magpies are hard to resist - so extreme but so able to carry it off.<BR/><BR/>And the last one perfectly captures the way our senses have to work harder if one is deprived.jemhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08181038873568527264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-48778842626691553292007-10-16T06:54:00.000-07:002007-10-16T06:54:00.000-07:00I love finding a 'gem' like you- wonderful! Will h...I love finding a 'gem' like you- wonderful! Will have to visit your other sites, the watercolour is stunning with those vivid colours. <BR/>I have never tired Haiku but everytime I read one like this it really tempts me to give it a go. Don't know that it would be anything like yours though!<BR/><BR/>Thanks for visiting my Sunday Scribbling :) Must go further down your page now to read yours.<BR/><BR/>Glad to be here!<BR/>JessicaJesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12975533458218029915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-17358216310375958712007-10-16T04:30:00.000-07:002007-10-16T04:30:00.000-07:00that last stanza is a visual that really can be he...that last stanza is a visual that really can be heard as well as seen... i loved this....paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-91695032905497813292007-10-15T19:59:00.000-07:002007-10-15T19:59:00.000-07:00Really like that last one!Really like that last one!Roswilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-77705625706222506962007-10-15T18:18:00.000-07:002007-10-15T18:18:00.000-07:00the first and the last are my favourites too...Tha...the first and the last are my favourites too...<BR/><BR/>Thank you for your wishes! I really needed them, thankfully it wasn't something big (as I had been anticipating), only a torn liagment and some inflammation...ANAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07414817964629791250noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-42550610541232773282007-10-15T14:49:00.000-07:002007-10-15T14:49:00.000-07:001st and 4th are my favourites but they all resonat...1st and 4th are my favourites but they all resonate.Gerald (Ackworth born)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10972748175799683560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-53963940140396223282007-10-15T13:48:00.000-07:002007-10-15T13:48:00.000-07:00Okay these are amazing.....especially the last two...Okay these are amazing.....especially the last two; actually the final one really had me there!Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15149139820474072721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-29231063539959335172007-10-15T12:17:00.000-07:002007-10-15T12:17:00.000-07:00Inspiring ...NasraInspiring ...NasraAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-79138727534011865532007-10-15T11:35:00.000-07:002007-10-15T11:35:00.000-07:00Love the dual-levels of resonance ofblack and whit...Love the dual-levels of resonance of<BR/><BR/>black and white<BR/>fencepost sitter<BR/>magpiePearlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05251168248457758117noreply@blogger.com