tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post1185736136029547398..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: Galena Whispers for RWP 112Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger32125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-26497938760037092962010-02-07T12:08:00.794-08:002010-02-07T12:08:00.794-08:00Rich, rich memories recalled here lovingly, imagin...Rich, rich memories recalled here lovingly, imaginatively.Allan Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18269413509026705846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-50157020546077475592010-02-07T00:22:22.851-08:002010-02-07T00:22:22.851-08:00loved it....
i am trying to motivate myself by rea...loved it....<br />i am trying to motivate myself by reading all the fun work of my friends..shraddhahttp://www.theselfloveproject.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-79266697781162756082010-02-06T19:20:52.035-08:002010-02-06T19:20:52.035-08:00Well done. Poignant images. I love:
for who coul...Well done. Poignant images. I love:<br />for who could foresee that safety<br />was only a figment of the mindErin Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-59328754550707602742010-02-06T18:13:41.798-08:002010-02-06T18:13:41.798-08:00Great poem: in creativity, content, imagery and as...Great poem: in creativity, content, imagery and assonance/consonance. I love "pulled shadows from a rock."Matthew Quinnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01458269895642460987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-69771604345213624282010-02-06T09:56:46.464-08:002010-02-06T09:56:46.464-08:00I enjoyed reading it :)I enjoyed reading it :)Marinelahttp://marinelareka.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-37859824231713469322010-02-06T06:58:11.849-08:002010-02-06T06:58:11.849-08:00A great read.A great read.Elaine Yimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07473617720902049498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-57018663745768008452010-02-06T02:55:30.994-08:002010-02-06T02:55:30.994-08:00Interesting read....your birds of imagination took...Interesting read....your birds of imagination took a great flight.geetahttp://www.itslifeblog.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-72704172880653025412010-02-05T19:29:06.605-08:002010-02-05T19:29:06.605-08:00Great images. I especially loved "pulled shad...Great images. I especially loved "pulled shadows from a rock".Francis Scudellarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-57516001067951900032010-02-05T17:53:02.824-08:002010-02-05T17:53:02.824-08:00Very interesting and enjoyable read.Very interesting and enjoyable read.spiritsoflenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09663418154339084941noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-11811792732485422612010-02-05T17:20:19.561-08:002010-02-05T17:20:19.561-08:00nice indeed...pulled shadows from a rock....great ...nice indeed...pulled shadows from a rock....great one....crystal set?...thought I was only one old enough to remember those....cheers and thanks for sharing thisWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-87455408087554763062010-02-05T17:03:57.438-08:002010-02-05T17:03:57.438-08:00Surprising in a fantastic way. I adore rocks, alth...Surprising in a fantastic way. I adore rocks, although I don't know radios.Debhttp://stoneymoss.org/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-15042312796805456762010-02-05T16:54:53.528-08:002010-02-05T16:54:53.528-08:00Kind of mining for mineral truth..conclusion is qu...Kind of mining for mineral truth..conclusion is quietly powerful.Irenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12918979903066830662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-90985825892121358492010-02-05T13:31:51.019-08:002010-02-05T13:31:51.019-08:00Wonderful use of minerals! (Did you know that my M...Wonderful use of minerals! (Did you know that my MFA thesis was called Galena Spinel?) :-)EKSwitajhttp://www.elizabethkateswitaj.net/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-77511057944335597492010-02-05T10:50:20.778-08:002010-02-05T10:50:20.778-08:00Nicely done!
PamelaNicely done!<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-39629772162992596932010-02-05T04:00:42.885-08:002010-02-05T04:00:42.885-08:00Wow. Just like a fractal, it requires long viewin...Wow. Just like a fractal, it requires long viewings to fully appreciate. Thank you for sharing this.<br /><br />Thank you visiting Shiteki Na Usagi and leaving a comment. Glad you liked the beehive haiku. Visit again anytime.Yousei Himehttp://tasmith1122.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-90327507117682024622010-02-04T18:02:49.610-08:002010-02-04T18:02:49.610-08:00From the very first line, you had the atmosphere o...From the very first line, you had the atmosphere of this one nailed... I like the tenuous feel of it, like the words might evaporate if I stare at it too long. Excellent language and imagery and memory. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-17459552082122363322010-02-04T14:13:09.928-08:002010-02-04T14:13:09.928-08:00I like this poem. I spent many hours building and ...I like this poem. I spent many hours building and listening to my own crystal radios. Do you still scratch around the skip in Idaho? Thanks for the memories.<br />Regards,<br />DHDonald Harbourhttp://woodennickel.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-58931083620169679502010-02-04T12:32:42.378-08:002010-02-04T12:32:42.378-08:00I like this. I get a sense of innocence...and this...I like this. I get a sense of innocence...and this reminds me of WWII, when it was radio, not TV or the Internet. How children (at least in the U.S.) knew of the war, but were yet mostly insulated from its effects. Of course, this also conjures up images of Cold War Era bunkers in the basement.<br /><br />Great work this week.<br /><br />-NicoleRaven's Wing Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-74468024610468782842010-02-04T12:18:02.278-08:002010-02-04T12:18:02.278-08:00I so admire this. It's beautifully crafted, e...I so admire this. It's beautifully crafted, evocative, and, somehow, haunting. Thank you.madeline d. murrayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13956396508529229674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-24204582446669166402010-02-04T12:14:39.527-08:002010-02-04T12:14:39.527-08:00Well-turned. I like this and I'm not certain ...Well-turned. I like this and I'm not certain why at this point . I will certainly read many more times. Very tight, well composed.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13823109424519657612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-46546722427220362412010-02-04T12:12:08.432-08:002010-02-04T12:12:08.432-08:00great final. As "needled" fits great in ...great final. As "needled" fits great in the last sentence and conencts weel with "fractal".<br /><br />it evokes children in a conflict area and their galena radios...Anahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06611955404994410354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-49152266282354703662010-02-04T11:21:03.826-08:002010-02-04T11:21:03.826-08:00Always admired those who could manage tuning anyth...Always admired those who could manage tuning anything from crystals. Love the bunkbed setup and the language is deliciousAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-31593744687338290772010-02-04T10:10:39.581-08:002010-02-04T10:10:39.581-08:00I had to look up calcimine and galena (not to be c...I had to look up calcimine and galena (not to be confused with calamine and Galena). :)<br /><br />I especially love that last stanza: <br /><br /><i>for who could foresee that safety<br />was only a figment of the mind<br />needled from a chunk of galena</i><br /><br />How little we know of safety and danger until long past possibilities of remedy...<br /><br />Very nice.Paul Oakleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17426789386840488470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-78453753671430098852010-02-04T09:36:16.394-08:002010-02-04T09:36:16.394-08:00An atmospheric conjuring of a fragment of memory.An atmospheric conjuring of a fragment of memory.Dickhttp://patteran.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-8678323910451430672010-02-04T09:11:53.394-08:002010-02-04T09:11:53.394-08:00I really like the intricacy and truly fresh associ...I really like the intricacy and truly fresh associations - my favorite stanza, the 2nd though it all works well and I also love the endingKaythttp://www.kaythoch.comnoreply@blogger.com