tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post777045057207264690..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: Poem for Big Tent PoetryTumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-26176614092862806592011-04-26T06:00:25.884-07:002011-04-26T06:00:25.884-07:00The words are striking and wild! Love that "...The words are striking and wild! Love that "she arises on the right side of the night"!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-88865588697169855092011-04-24T22:00:24.104-07:002011-04-24T22:00:24.104-07:00I was out and about yesterday. Went to one of my f...I was out and about yesterday. Went to one of my favorite parks with a river running through it. The water was moving very fast and I watched a mallard being swept along in that current. Your poem reminded me of that, in many ways.<br />Wonderfully myserious imagery.<br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-17181968018888868312011-04-24T19:11:14.423-07:002011-04-24T19:11:14.423-07:00We went to my folks' place in the mountains fo...We went to my folks' place in the mountains for Easter. Just got home. One reason I like this piece is because we had a family discussion about the pronunciation of creek. My dad and several others say crick. Crick works well in this piece. :) The first stanza is gripping, and I love the last one, and "flash of wings."<br />~Brendabrenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-52129729111874862732011-04-24T14:02:20.994-07:002011-04-24T14:02:20.994-07:00Interesting, could be read in many ways.
www.theq...Interesting, could be read in many ways.<br /><br />www.thequietone.netCathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12912699773946281784noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-19673287747458320172011-04-24T12:52:33.597-07:002011-04-24T12:52:33.597-07:00Take the image...add the words...and you have a ha...Take the image...add the words...and you have a haunting, enigmatic scenario. I have enjoyed trying to "solve" this. vbAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-2024471612239897702011-04-24T05:08:48.091-07:002011-04-24T05:08:48.091-07:00Striking and mysterious!
~laurieStriking and mysterious!<br /><br />~laurieLaurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-75721258309687672762011-04-23T21:23:37.292-07:002011-04-23T21:23:37.292-07:00it sounds chilly
stormyit sounds chilly<br />stormylucychilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519163424062626658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-81428483815325081102011-04-23T08:28:20.309-07:002011-04-23T08:28:20.309-07:00ah, another art lover. i'll be back just to se...ah, another art lover. i'll be back just to see the painting at the top of the blog. thanks.Cadan Henryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12490214737394053932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-71044216140722651252011-04-23T07:58:18.170-07:002011-04-23T07:58:18.170-07:00nicely done!nicely done!Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-83879307638742577892011-04-22T14:06:05.218-07:002011-04-22T14:06:05.218-07:00That is just beautiful, Susan.
PamelaThat is just beautiful, Susan.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-33922673200467591632011-04-22T11:12:47.013-07:002011-04-22T11:12:47.013-07:00Beautiful!Beautiful!Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00903678715925613725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-31822666336739717722011-04-22T11:07:11.000-07:002011-04-22T11:07:11.000-07:00A wonderful concoction of imagery and action! Bot...A wonderful concoction of imagery and action! Both vivid, impressive and haunting.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com