tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post719448565769733994..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: Poem for Totally Optional PromptsTumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-11459338115423997662009-07-11T11:29:51.836-07:002009-07-11T11:29:51.836-07:00your poetry always sings to me and puts me a good ...your poetry always sings to me and puts me a good mood.George S Battyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15407137341843413701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-89284097474169138452009-07-11T10:47:01.313-07:002009-07-11T10:47:01.313-07:00this is just breathtaking. lovely.
I gave you a b...this is just breathtaking. lovely.<br /><br />I gave you a blog award, because you are the queen! Do come see:<br />http://therer2doors.wordpress.com/2009/07/11/i-really-want-to-be-the-queen/angiehttp://therer2doors.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-27351641683737871312009-07-10T20:53:46.143-07:002009-07-10T20:53:46.143-07:00You certainly know how to get one's attention ...You certainly know how to get one's attention with your vivid imagery and beautiful words. I love the description you gave these fireworks. Incredible write. So many good lines. Have a great night.poefusionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-86730417423783175892009-07-10T19:39:26.359-07:002009-07-10T19:39:26.359-07:00oooh, that sounds just like our 4th.oooh, that sounds just like our 4th.sgreerpitthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07764262558160301061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-91944752615028523982009-07-10T18:57:07.643-07:002009-07-10T18:57:07.643-07:00rub a nub of dark
and a hum soft as breadcrumbs.
...rub a nub of dark<br />and a hum soft as breadcrumbs.<br /><br />lurv.ly.Pearlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05251168248457758117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-90309958606852544802009-07-10T18:47:36.381-07:002009-07-10T18:47:36.381-07:00I loved the title!
abstractingI loved the title!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2009/07/abstracting.html" rel="nofollow">abstracting</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-15076731062130840402009-07-10T15:21:08.486-07:002009-07-10T15:21:08.486-07:00fantastic...fantastic...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-56102270739419044482009-07-10T09:07:15.321-07:002009-07-10T09:07:15.321-07:00I tried to pick out a favorite line but they all s...I tried to pick out a favorite line but they all sing!Dee Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-65867653251467161042009-07-10T08:04:52.061-07:002009-07-10T08:04:52.061-07:00Your descriptive abilities astound me. Some great ...Your descriptive abilities astound me. Some great use of words.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-8537593464443806202009-07-10T06:38:53.944-07:002009-07-10T06:38:53.944-07:00your ability to create a visual astounds me...your ability to create a visual astounds me...paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-79870140943018471262009-07-09T22:51:57.044-07:002009-07-09T22:51:57.044-07:00Beautiful fireworks, Tumble words! And a poem that...Beautiful fireworks, Tumble words! And a poem that goes very well with it. You are brilliant! Have a great weekend.Reader Wilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06384603525251159272noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-44363321662772366822009-07-09T22:20:10.924-07:002009-07-09T22:20:10.924-07:00My God! How vividly imaginative!
with a hum soft ...My God! How vividly imaginative!<br /><i><br />with a hum soft as breadcrumbs<br /></i><br />is stunningly brilliant.Felicityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11648175631096848730noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-20856019027941139942009-07-09T21:29:25.729-07:002009-07-09T21:29:25.729-07:00Beautiful.....Beautiful.....Jeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-50747422056638516482009-07-09T18:18:02.307-07:002009-07-09T18:18:02.307-07:00wonderful
and
the last stanza:
with a hum soft as...wonderful <br />and<br />the last stanza:<br />with a hum soft as breadcrumbs<br />the crone retreats to her crater<br />and the rain begins to gush<br /><br />is my favorite!Tammie Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09018402134070834516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-80272222566387665482009-07-09T17:09:45.356-07:002009-07-09T17:09:45.356-07:00'A hum as soft as breadcrumbs'.... a uniqu...'A hum as soft as breadcrumbs'.... a unique phrase and I could never explain to anyone that it feels exactly right!Rinkly Rimeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-41376522573028525312009-07-09T17:05:31.578-07:002009-07-09T17:05:31.578-07:00Coop! That second line really sings!Coop! That second line really sings!Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14765633868539628820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-18429615724634097332009-07-09T16:57:21.959-07:002009-07-09T16:57:21.959-07:00I never cease being amazed by how wonderful and vi...I never cease being amazed by how wonderful and vivid the imagery is in your writing. Absolutely amazing.Jane Doehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11087464056692451751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-48827002220378807272009-07-09T14:54:57.116-07:002009-07-09T14:54:57.116-07:00Oh, that first stanza is awesome! So unique! And...Oh, that first stanza is awesome! So unique! And I love the breadcrumbs simile, too!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.com