tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post6996400371437901006..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: RenewalTumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-65168741453178832632007-10-10T19:04:00.000-07:002007-10-10T19:04:00.000-07:00Oh wow, that was mind blowing. Superb, thank you.Oh wow, that was mind blowing. Superb, thank you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-7535512219575755732007-10-10T17:29:00.000-07:002007-10-10T17:29:00.000-07:00Great images! I needed to read through it thrice t...Great images! I needed to read through it thrice to let the words dissolve in me. Cool fractal!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-61635030768729244522007-10-10T15:34:00.000-07:002007-10-10T15:34:00.000-07:00Hi Sue! Really nice! Dawn is the ultimate transfor...Hi Sue! Really nice! Dawn is the ultimate transformation and renewal -- so beautiful!<BR/>:)Clarehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11746014771712020963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-65989112294842952932007-10-10T09:49:00.000-07:002007-10-10T09:49:00.000-07:00Lovely. It makes me think of a phoenix. So hopeful...Lovely. It makes me think of a phoenix. So hopeful.Holly Machttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03610077263690125535noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-26074433123524919862007-10-10T03:03:00.000-07:002007-10-10T03:03:00.000-07:00I DID NOT like it!Just kidding, I think everyone e...I DID NOT like it!<BR/><BR/><BR/>Just kidding, I think everyone else have taken the words i wanted to say.......... so I say nought..<BR/>Sigh!Stevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16715829842292110540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-74398575137288505792007-10-10T02:16:00.000-07:002007-10-10T02:16:00.000-07:003 excellent stanzas ... wonderful language of rene...3 excellent stanzas ... wonderful language of renewal! Peace, JP/debJP (mom)https://www.blogger.com/profile/03120439923927414464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-17738914401208608342007-10-10T01:22:00.000-07:002007-10-10T01:22:00.000-07:00vivid, moody and yet soothing ... renewal through ...vivid, moody and yet soothing ... renewal through sleep ... love itAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-74378933883946954632007-10-09T23:59:00.000-07:002007-10-09T23:59:00.000-07:00Very Nice! I particularly liked these lines: "a be...Very Nice! I particularly liked these lines: "a bell jar of wax<BR/>winks through night's coma"<BR/><BR/>And your art, as always, beautiful!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-20959592523291279172007-10-09T20:04:00.000-07:002007-10-09T20:04:00.000-07:00All of it, brilliant.xoBlueAll of it, brilliant.<BR/>xo<BR/>BlueGillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08845512494417503198noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-21009393127603777442007-10-09T19:04:00.000-07:002007-10-09T19:04:00.000-07:00Sue, I love coming here. The artwork is a wond...Sue, <BR/> I love coming here. The artwork is a wonderful touch! My favorite line "bridges burn black to castles of ash" :)Danhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13986014894382899336noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-57886848819996483642007-10-09T17:57:00.000-07:002007-10-09T17:57:00.000-07:00Indeed dawn can be a powerful reminder of the pass...Indeed dawn can be a powerful reminder of the passing of time. Great poem!Gilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14764043301335852527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-23696204500777549832007-10-09T17:45:00.000-07:002007-10-09T17:45:00.000-07:00Hi - The imagery is beautiful and realistic. Nice...Hi - The imagery is beautiful and realistic. Nice work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-36028638719595672382007-10-09T17:24:00.000-07:002007-10-09T17:24:00.000-07:00Your words have struck a deep chord in me... my fa...Your words have struck a deep chord in me... my favorite line, "to castles of ash..." pure magic.Leahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07101643429585271655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-89041712465310973962007-10-09T16:01:00.000-07:002007-10-09T16:01:00.000-07:00Forgot to say - good luck on your Nanowrimo/novel....Forgot to say - good luck on your Nanowrimo/novel. It's nice to know other people are writing novels at the same time.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-20349211591148389042007-10-09T15:53:00.000-07:002007-10-09T15:53:00.000-07:00a delightful reada delightful readAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-48932684884139887222007-10-09T15:52:00.000-07:002007-10-09T15:52:00.000-07:00lovely sleepy poem! I SO wish I could write real ...lovely sleepy poem! I SO wish I could write real poetry like this tumblewords. :)Lucyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11442070518518821892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-68816460353670293482007-10-09T14:58:00.000-07:002007-10-09T14:58:00.000-07:00First the body, then the mind, and finally...light...First the body, then the mind, and finally...light!<BR/><BR/>Great poem about sleep.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-46650135691332367912007-10-09T14:28:00.000-07:002007-10-09T14:28:00.000-07:00As I read your poem I kept picturing an old guitar...As I read your poem I kept picturing an old guitar, slowly giving up its music and reverting back to wood and strings. Your words touched something very deep inside of me.Robinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02409530202277375625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-64632239578429051552007-10-09T13:50:00.000-07:002007-10-09T13:50:00.000-07:00What a lovely word picture to go with the picture ...What a lovely word picture to go with the picture on the screen. Loved it!Mary Timmehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06610970753020969331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-92198446665740535932007-10-09T12:55:00.000-07:002007-10-09T12:55:00.000-07:00Hi there......I am taken by your poem.....the proc...Hi there......<BR/><BR/>I am taken by your poem.....the process of renewal...of letting go throughout the night reaching for the future, for dawn's renewal and starting again. <BR/><BR/>great word tumbles :)awarenesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06098432781380754899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-85233528830455637572007-10-09T12:32:00.000-07:002007-10-09T12:32:00.000-07:00Moody and etheral, yet grounded. I like your take ...Moody and etheral, yet grounded. I like your take on the prompt.Debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14744896385434246402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-8888338351506652562007-10-09T10:31:00.000-07:002007-10-09T10:31:00.000-07:00Your poem flows so well and the fractal is lovely....Your poem flows so well and the fractal is lovely. I enjoyed it.Rae Trigghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10727737549878623376noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-19611299060371660802007-10-09T09:48:00.000-07:002007-10-09T09:48:00.000-07:00As always my friend, your work speaks volumes. I l...As always my friend, your work speaks volumes. I love the imagery and the picture paint with them.. Great work.....<BR/>(wish I could say so much in a few words.)<BR/><BR/>love-bdCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-26335161865443417772007-10-09T06:05:00.000-07:002007-10-09T06:05:00.000-07:00Dawn...enforces renewal. Very vivid...Dawn...enforces renewal. Very vivid...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-24094784788817878682007-10-09T05:35:00.000-07:002007-10-09T05:35:00.000-07:00Very interesting image I get with your poem. Love ...Very interesting image I get with your poem. <BR/><BR/>Love the fractal.<BR/><BR/>Rose<BR/><BR/>xoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com